Wake (Be Not Persistent)

By Syn

Be not, My Love, persistent in dreams
Cradle this soul, which falls in flames
plunging far beneath these crimson seems
translucent but brightly shining

Traverse the night sky, and weep
For Lover's Moon we'll keep
United with flesh, bound with our minds
Persistent in dreams, mad tracker of time

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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Saturday, September 4, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Zhee On Tuesday, September 7, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    this was breath taking.. brilliant work!

  • A former member wrote: This was an amzing piece of writing.

  • DarkWolf On Saturday, September 4, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    I like the first two lines of both stanzas. Excellent title as well. Great write. Michael

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