Empty Canvas

By Syn

I have this empty canvas
stretched across my skin
I beg of you to color it
before my time is spent

A work in progress.

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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Monday, August 30, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • DarkWolf On Monday, September 6, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    What a great visual image. Lovely wording. -Michael

  • Anth On Monday, August 30, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    really well expressed thought

  • A former member wrote: Nice picture of canvas/skin... I like that. I hadn't thought of what glass said... and now I'm curious too. ~Wish Upon A Star

  • glasshouse On Monday, August 30, 2004, glasshouse (548)By person wrote:

    Ok. I like this a lot. But did you mean that this piece is a work in progress. Or that the art that is your life, desiring for completion, is a work in progress? Just thinking. Beautiful words. Short but effective. -Glass

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