you were my life
By Syn
you were my everything
my breath...my life
you were my light
on a darkless night
you were my tears
that washed into the sea
you were my closure
on who I was to be
you were my heart
that you molded out of clay
you were my likeness
that melted all the hate
you were my dreams
that kept me alive
you were my sanity
you were my life
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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Wednesday, July 28, 2004.
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On Friday, August 6, 2004, DarkWolf
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Amazing. You captured this so well. Amazing. -Michael
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, MABUS
(20) wrote:
i love the emotion in this poem. great write
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
..finishing this left me with a big sigh and a heavy heart. The perfect amount of words to convey a whole ton of meaning and emotion. Great write.