In Love And Death

By Syn

One last kiss
I steal of your lips
tender touch of your
weakening grip

And it drips from my wrist
trailing your cheek
eyes in a gaze
escaping of weak

Tears fill our eyes
but cry not of this life
we are giving ever so
graciously as sacrifice

Tainted by truth
consumed by our lust
I give you this blade
with abounding love

For tonight we die
in eachother's arms
This beautiful death
ever welcoming and warm

(Inspired by Join Me in Death by HIM)

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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Wednesday, August 18, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Miztaken4beauty On Friday, March 26, 2010, Miztaken4beauty (177)By person wrote:

    Morbid but soul stealingly romantic.

  • Niemand On Saturday, December 29, 2007, Niemand (361)By person wrote:

    So Dark and romantic.-Gin

  • DarkWolf On Friday, September 3, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    This is SO Morbidly Romantic!! The last two stanzas are enrapturing! god this one is so beautiful. Another favorite of mine. Thank you for this one. Great song also :) -Michael

  • A former member wrote: Join me in death is a good song, however the lyrics are nothing to dwell on. These may actually be quite a bit better than HIM lyrics. But the music is good. +T.P.U+

  • A former member wrote: HIM "Join me" has great lyrics...and I like your poem also. Tonight we died in eachothers arms..que romantico..

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