Disenchanted

By Syn

A tear upon a whisper
a dream upon a touch
A movement with a glimpse
of what we love too much

Flightless among
the dampened ground
devoid of intention
muffled with sound

And life is made
of careless thoughts
And persecutes those
that have been brought

For treasures are found
within the soul
but buried within
the lies we mold

Stains seep through
and tarnish our mind
And no one can cherish
the meek and the kind

And when souls disenchant
and strain far apart
I'm reminded of how
I'm absent of heart


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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Wednesday, July 28, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Circe Avalon On Saturday, September 4, 2004, Circe Avalon (115)By person wrote:

    I think I cried. Very touching, my heart truly broke and I mourn it's passing. Thank you

  • Blyss Rayne On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Blyss Rayne (9)By person wrote:

    truth. plain, hollow (beautifully expressed, i may add) truth. wonderful work. XD -Taylor-

  • DarkWolf On Friday, August 6, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    So empty.. so hollow.. Beautiful. -Michael

  • A former member wrote: so very down, yet utterly hypnotic

  • Northstar On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    I love this poem--the beginning completely entangled me and the flow and structure carry along your expression--very nicely done

  • NikesRain On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    I love this...I got completely lost in it, with it's upfront truths told so eloquently. However, I know you must have a heart to write this beautifully and deeply. Wonderful work.

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