Comments by Bella Butchery
- "i would die if my girl said this to me... trust me, with words like this, who would not give you a chance? being ignored is not always a bad thing, because you skip alot of the broken heart syndrome, and you end up with someone you say these words to. but if its over, this is where they get the term 'to love and lost, is better than to never love at all'"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Everyone Deserves A Chance" by Mischevious Princess
- "g ray/p ray, d ead/br ead, bl ind/f ind..... alternating suffix's, ie- four/more, white/right, one/sun...... in one half, it was done, the other half, not... i was merely stating, it makes it simply feels more original."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Incoherence" by Lawless Fighter
- "In grammar, a suffix or ending is an affix which is placed at the end of a word. Common examples are case endings, which indicate the grammatical case of nouns or adjectives, and verb endings, which form the conjugation of verbs- TM wikipedia.... just constructive critisisim..."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Incoherence" by Lawless Fighter
- "to help with the rhyme scheme in the future, it helps to switch up the end suffix of verbs / adjectives / and nouns.. i saw you do it alittle, so expand on it, and see what takes form, maybe you will like it more"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Incoherence" by Lawless Fighter
- "gore whore.... i love that term. not in a degrating way of course, but your style reminds me of that kind of writing.... excellent"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "So Pretty" by DowngradeBeauty
- "recylcled points of view before they march to the grave.... just a line the end made me think of, this was fantastic... i always find your work to be a bit more reflective and intellegent than what i am used to reading around here -cloud"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "What There Is" by johntaiyu
- "Existentially I feel like this piece speaks more words about the self (quite ironic), than any 16 year old emo cutter could ever divulge. Your honesty speaks volumes and sets a tone for deeply reflective material that is uncommon to what I am used to seeing on this site, and what I am used to reading in general. People should take notes on how to write, and you should be the one giving the lecture. The vacuity in the beginning makes it all seem hopeless, but in the end there is a realization of hope (minus the melodramatic cliché), and makes me want to try harder in my own life."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Paralyzed Words - Fruitless Battles" by Revisable Retina
- "to tell the truth, sometimes. i write in pieces, then fit where appropriate, sometimes it takes me a long time to think of an ending.... most people only consider an opening and closing to the most potent part of a poem, so i try and utalize that fact :D"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "The Waves Whispered What You Are" by Bella Butchery
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