There Was us

By italianbella

Midnight winds breathe your name...
Clothed in only moonlight...
Your velvet lips burn kisses into my inner thighs
Black silken skies..
twinkling diamonds
The scent of lilacs
I feel
Secure...
Concealed...
With you.
Youre lips pressed against mine.
Two..
melting into
one.
One love
One soul
Two minds.
Silk surrendering to satin.
The earth our bed
The sky our canvas
We'll paint love on sighs
and pass then off to fireflys.

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© 2007 italianbella
Published on Saturday, December 29, 2007.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Narcissa On Sunday, January 27, 2008, Narcissa (404)By person wrote:

    simply beautiful... Im glad you decided to stay :)

  • Err0r On Monday, January 7, 2008, Err0r (365)By person wrote:

    I haven't bothered to read a lot of poetry lately, but I'm glad I took the time to read this by you. How very passionate.

  • Bella Butchery On Friday, January 4, 2008, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    trully lovley, and makes me think of my love.... heart warming

  • A former member wrote: Very calming, sounds like a comfortable place to get lost. Nicely written.

  • RubyXero On Tuesday, January 1, 2008, RubyXero (484)By person wrote:

    ooo...i'm loving the "clothed in only moonlight"...for the winds. that was great. now to continue reading ... that was very dream like. loved the last two lines. perfect ending.

  • A former member wrote: i agree with heartdripsblack, i loved that last two lines

  • Fantecstasy On Sunday, December 30, 2007, Fantecstasy (122)By person wrote:

    It was worth pausing my music to read this. Very mellow, but still hinting passion. Absolutely impressive. *tips hat*

  • A former member wrote: *sighs* Lovely!

  • thesuccubusreturns On Sunday, December 30, 2007, thesuccubusreturns (12)By person wrote:

    i know exactly what you mean. this poem paint such a real picture to me. its strong and emotional. i loved it.

  • A former member wrote: the whole poem was amazing but the last 2 lines were just beautiful beyond words. ~ hdb.

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