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Everyone Deserves A Chance
By Mischevious Princess
I can't believe you actually decided to give me a chance.
I'm usually the girl everyone sees but ignores.
I've never been happier with someone so special.
You bring me up when everyone seems to try and drag me down.
There aren't enough words in the world to tell you how I feel.
I know we've had our hard times & our good ones.
But life is filled with bumpy roads.
I'll always be here for you...
even if we aren't together.
I love you very much
& I will always care for you.
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© 2008 A. Young
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A former member wrote:
Up until now, i thought that, maybe i ended up beeing born in the wrong century,..i never thought there could be anyone else feeling what i feel,..but reading your work was like reading my soul, and i can still hear the echoes..and Bella Butchery is right...'i would die if my girl said this to me...', it would be the sweetest death out of all my deaths,but,..even so...i love her too much to let this make me stand my ground....cause, before i reached for the pen, i reached for this world with my heart wide open, regardless of the pain and anguish i might have felt..(sorry for such a long comment,..the moon often does that to me;)) )
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On Sunday, May 18, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
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wrote:
Powerfull and honest write. Touched me deep
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On Friday, January 4, 2008, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
i would die if my girl said this to me... trust me, with words like this, who would not give you a chance? being ignored is not always a bad thing, because you skip alot of the broken heart syndrome, and you end up with someone you say these words to. but if its over, this is where they get the term 'to love and lost, is better than to never love at all'
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