Comments by Stephanie Sideways
- "Revisiting, and seeing things you had forgotten about through new eyes, a fresh perspective . Can't appreciate it til
It's been and gone . Contradiction of terms 'death! and 'new' Parts of us have to die before we can continue to live sometimes.....but we use it to shape us. . I wish I could get inside your mind more.... Great pic.... Handsome ;-)"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Dead Like New" by metaphormachine
- "So much more depth to your poem, like a level under a level, a dream within a dream, a story of a story....... Thank you south for sharing this myth / legend I knew nothing about . X "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "The Mead of Poetry" by metaphormachine
- "Mead; an sweet alcoholic drink or a meadow, or drinking a sweet alcoholic drink in a beautiful meadow! Well I came into poetry back to front and sideways and am zigzagging my way backwards, to see how we got here. The greats are calling to me, but I am glad I came in this way, listening to my own muse. Now my little musings want to party hard and absorb herself in this world. She is trouble. She gives me a run for my money. She drinks anything she fancies and is hungry. I love this poem coz it made me splurt out where I think I sit amounts all this wonderful wordy stuff at the moment . Looking forward to more new stuff honey!!!!! "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "The Mead of Poetry" by metaphormachine
- "I saw an ocean, to travel across, literally, or as an obstacle. This is because of sea horses and fish mentioned, giving impression of movement and fluidity. The idea of spreading far and wide Also, making people notice by use of the word fanfare, but also linking the idea of fanning wings....... fluttering, a sort of ripple effect, spreading. . wings are a reflecting of each other , and contemporaneous gives the impression that this is happening all over, reflected all over the country or even world. So I conclude it is about the spreading of an idea/ ideal / movement. As the butterfly is rather dull and live on scrubland, the movement or belief being spread may not be all that pretty, as it were.???? Or it could simply be about the adventures of a butterfly called Edith. :-) x x x"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Edith's Marbled White" by metaphormachine
- "Restraint, holding back in conflict with her feelings. One part wants to do right by God, one part , like the insect, wants to eat you alive. Who can blame her! ;-) x "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Mantis" by metaphormachine
- "Watching someone change and grow! Fascinated by their sense of wonder of the world. Wanting to get into their head. ........ Another intrueging one M. Clues for us to piece together . X"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Destination" by metaphormachine
- "Read my sweet man as a short way of expressing that, although we have all these bloody machines to do lots of our work for us , every one still complains of perpetual tiredness. Too busy during the day to enjoy and when the sun goes down, to tired to enjoy the moon . That's the feel I get from your minimal words. You never say if I am barking up the wrong tree or not so I shall just continue to enjoy them in my own way. X x "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Tired" by metaphormachine
- "That first stanza is breathtaking. Then you are reminiscing at how you were so amazed by your first shared trips on the magical train, Reencountered and explored again very vividly . I really enjoyed this. X x "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Baby, Blue Sky" by metaphormachine
- "Reflective, beautiful dark igneous rock likened to incest. A secret . Previous but dark . Dangerous ground, symbolised by the rock. Why rape equal.? Interesting read to piece together. :-)"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Obsidian" by metaphormachine
- "I have spent an age reading and re reading as I found it fascinating to unpack and unload these carefully picked lines and their syntax ........ You Know it will probably go know where but for now you are quite enjoying it even though you know
It's not a permanent thing. (Plenty more fish in the sea.) happy to enjoy because the sex is damn good! Oh if I got it all wrong, I still had tons of fun"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Surfaces" by metaphormachine
- "I read it that you quite enjoy masturbating in full view of a sprawled out beautiful woman, in a mag or the real thing. But then I have quite a filthy mind . Sensual but 'masculine' read and you bring something unique to this sight. I like where it takes my mind :-)"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "A Pack of Snakes" by metaphormachine
- "My Sunflowers are a design of nature. ;-) we will always want to express these wonderful sensual, erotic endeavours . All the time hot blood runs through us. X"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Venus Moon" by metaphormachine
- "Twelve is the number of what is complete. Perfection in the numeracy world . We may drive ourselves to reach that, and join the subjectively agreed few, or we don't bother to stand in line, and scrabble around for a back door. X x"
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Ode to Access to Room 12" by metaphormachine
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