Ode to Access to Room 12
By metaphormachine
The poetic persona
to beat its wings
from here to forever
for some it's a mirth.
I feel followed
observed by
the fine gentleman emerges
out of 12th room.
He goes
in the hidden room
I mean the companion
suspect.
The bright green chairs
in suchlike bright rooms
my lady with red hair
a blaze of colour.
In sterile rooms
here in front of room 12
no access
which will remain a mystery.
I just think the only
the corresponding permit
embossed to have
here an access.
Therefore we have
no identity
to pass to explore
well known about it.
If you are in this
green chair
sitting to waiting
because of hard material.
Hard back pain you squirm
a common disease
looking for freedom betimes
new considered before.
Sterile fingernails sundering
miss they are on the floor
yesterday cut in parlous
such woman's thing.
You are now the new line
write not till wait
in front room 12
he goes inside.
In his imagination
presentation before they here
organize is suspect
alleged commonplace.
This they must do
in prosperity by people
in those mankind living
do not know.
How their body works
this body machine
what works
what does wrong.
Whose body machine
had while waiting
here in a bright room
12th front room.
In these sterile rooms
here in front of room 12
an access
will remain mysterious.
I just think
the corresponding permit
minted through sold
have no access.
Whose body machine
had while waiting
here in the bright room
12th front room.
Author's Note:
Poem 10 - Book 6 of 15 - ...Rush -Awards
Comments on "Ode to Access to Room 12"
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On Saturday, January 26, 2013, Stephanie Sideways
(276) wrote:
Twelve is the number of what is complete. Perfection in the numeracy world . We may drive ourselves to reach that, and join the subjectively agreed few, or we don't bother to stand in line, and scrabble around for a back door. X x
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On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
What you do know everything, my Queen!?! There's no escape. Has it something to do with vampires? Oh, it's witching hour!? ;) Thanks, little witch!
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On Friday, January 25, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
very very interesting. story book like, how sweet!! i love it. hello there you .
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On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Aaah, Mrs. Devilish, honored the fella says thank you! Exceptionally this time are not just my tags interesting ... this is a progress? :)
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On Saturday, February 2, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Sorry! Ms, I mean ... In German "Ms" would be a discrimination ... so I'm writing this to all ladies ...
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A former member wrote:
My, my... Intriguing write, my friend. Well made poem and one that flowed almost like silk.
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On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Thanks again, my dearest friendly Goddess! You're enchanting & I'm honored ... :)
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A former member wrote:
Interesting concept. I like it,
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On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Thanks! I'm happy & honored ... :)