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A Pack of Snakes
By metaphormachine
The clenched male snake world
a whisper in the faint background
the chucking of a thought
into convenient, white kosher tent
the apparatus is mysterious.
He sprawls sideways a bit about round
which measures a pack of snakes
consideration falls on us, but her fast weighty
apparently they have an expression, very graceful.
Can not you guess the exact trove
a pound of women here for us
breasts in his hands, softness in her sweet own lap
we make them naked, them we expose, unmask.
No more noise for me, for me
full consciousness, the reality is I personally close
always stay clear, omnipresent, nevermore
I enjoy the outdoors, clear view sight pure
finally, real is very much!
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Copyright 2013 metaphormachine
Published on Saturday, January 26, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Poem 18 - Book 6 of 15 - … Rush -Comments on "A Pack of Snakes"
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On Sunday, January 27, 2013, FadedBlues
(2169)
wrote:
...the snake has been the bane & the allure of naked women since the serpent enticed Eve in the Garden...
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On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Ooooh, yeah, FB! You've got it! This was an inspiration & brainchild of myself while this game of words ... You're comments are always warmly welcome ... Thanks, again! :)
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On Sunday, January 27, 2013, Stephanie Sideways
(276) wrote:
I read it that you quite enjoy masturbating in full view of a sprawled out beautiful woman, in a mag or the real thing. But then I have quite a filthy mind . Sensual but 'masculine' read and you bring something unique to this sight. I like where it takes my mind :-)
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On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Stephy, Steph, Steph ... you have ideas & visions!!? Tsss! :) I need something in the flesh or moving pictures ... Only one picture brings me rarely on tour ... on such a tour ... but of course I enjoy erotic photography ... a passion of mine. Maybe sometimes comes out this faible in some poems ... & you are the only one who can see & feel it?! Yeah, at this moment I felt very masculine. As always, I am enchanted by you & your answer ... Thank you! :)
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A former member wrote:
I really like your chopped up, crazy grammar & wording...an interesting language you speak. Originality is always a strength for a writer...good stuff, mm.
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On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Thank you, BB! :D A very sympathetic profile name you have there ... very confidence-inspiring ...I'm curious on your stuff ... I hope you have now no hard feelings because of my statements?! ... Thanks for the comment & the praise. I'm honored!
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A former member wrote:
Thank you...you're quite welcome...& no I do not mind, in fact I encourage any criticism. It takes a whole, whole lot of effort to offend me, sir...so no worries.
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On Saturday, January 26, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
This is as unique as the writer... i enjoyed this very much.... thank you for sharing...
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On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Hmmh, very nice compliment, the first words ... it's flattering for myself ... though of course the question remains open whether this is now meant good or bad ... Thank you, ones more, for your comment! :)
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A former member wrote:
open and freeing, spirited. i enjoyed this, much like you seem to enjoy life. a great construct. thank you.
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On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Thanks to you! Yeah, Life can be so great & I enjoy mainly the beauty & for myself important things ... There is a great quote of Charles Dickens, which describes it best. The original text I could not find, so I translate it from German into English: "Is there finally a better shape to cope with life, as with love and humor?" That's it! My slogan! :)
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On Saturday, January 26, 2013, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
I really enjoyed this! It had a very unique flow and word usage to it. Wonderful write, indeed!
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On Monday, January 28, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Ruby? Where were you all the time ... I miss you here ... thanks, thank you for the flowers ... I am glad if you can really enjoy any thing from myself ... :) You are however ever warmly welcome!
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