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Tired
By metaphormachine
Sunless exhausted
Hm, where the moons are enthroned.
Become you machinable
in progress
again
unexpected.
Exhausted sunless
&
tired.
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Copyright 2013 metaphormachine
Published on Thursday, February 7, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Poem 12 - Book 2 of 15 - Floatation Essence -Comments on "Tired"
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A former member wrote:
world weary and a sense of acceptance in defeat. I feel I understand this one intimately. the moon understands, commiserates in its thoughtful glow... beautiful and solitary, somewhat sullen. i hope you aren't feeling this way now. much love and respect, dr. Strangelove. xo
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On Saturday, February 9, 2013, metaphormachine
(133)
wrote:
Tired I am still quite often ... that depends entirely on my low blood pressure ... I think. Thanks, I think it's better, dear! :) XO
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On Thursday, February 7, 2013, Stephanie Sideways
(276) wrote:
Read my sweet man as a short way of expressing that, although we have all these bloody machines to do lots of our work for us , every one still complains of perpetual tiredness. Too busy during the day to enjoy and when the sun goes down, to tired to enjoy the moon . That's the feel I get from your minimal words. You never say if I am barking up the wrong tree or not so I shall just continue to enjoy them in my own way. X x
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On Friday, February 8, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Dear, I have already written quite often that you are often really right with your guesses & imaginations ... Also, I like your very own interpretations, so I would like rarely reply something ... Must one always describe the sense of his poems & explain them? Much nicer it is when it makes to the reader several doors available ... through which one door the reader goes, is up to him ... Thank you, sweetheart! for your concern & comment! :)
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On Friday, February 8, 2013, Stephanie Sideways
(276) wrote:
S'ok . You are right. X x x Your poems are intrueging hun. X
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On Saturday, February 9, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
:) We have in fact now been clarified what my motivation was, right?! I have told you a lot ... via mail, dear ... thank you forever, dear! XOXO :)
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