The Liquid Form of Movement

By metaphormachine

The dust

on my computer

is a gentle small

Eternity ...

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Copyright 2013 metaphormachine
Published on Wednesday, January 23, 2013.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Poem 5 - Book 10 of 15 - Particle Accelerator - Part 1 - Fisherman's Hope -
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  • A former member wrote: Heh. Sometimes, the smallest of poems and stanzas can have the deepest meaning or/and impact on certain individuals than ones that are longer. Grazie, friend. This gives me something to wonder about. *Smiles warmly*

  • metaphormachine On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, metaphormachine (133)By person wrote:

    Oh, I never thought that Satan can be so charming & cute ... You conjure me again a smile in my face ... Thank you, TSG ... I want more of you ...!?! :)

  • A former member wrote: so few words yet it says so much.. nicely done.

  • metaphormachine On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, metaphormachine (133)By person wrote:

    Thank you, Mrs. TWIISTED, my angel ... I'm honored & glad to read you ... :)

  • Stephanie Sideways On Thursday, January 24, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276)By person wrote:

    Soz about spellings. Fat thumbs. X

  • metaphormachine On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, metaphormachine (133)By person wrote:

    Tasty thumbs, I'm sure ... :) I haven't found any fault ...

  • Stephanie Sideways On Wednesday, January 23, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276)By person wrote:

    String theory was mentioned in another poem. So I guess you are drawing us to the idea of tag magnificence of the microscopic? I can imagine you fingering the dust and getting list in your thoughts for a moment.

  • metaphormachine On Tuesday, January 29, 2013, metaphormachine (133)By person wrote:

    Mrs. Sideways, I love the physics ... especially the astrophysics ... For me it is pure poetry ... in retrospect dawned on me that the dust especially has lain on the keyboard ... sometimes you find mistakes only after years ... but that board also belongs to the machine, part of my computer ... Well, what I might all to finger in my life ... Oh, now I should better say nothing more ...!? :)

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