Comments by purr_verse

  • "lovely, evocative piece ('purplexed' - bonus highlycool points for that one!). Excellent imagery, excellent write."
    Posted by purr_verse on "running" by knightmirror
  • "wonderful write! "unearned halos" - excellently said... love the format and feeling of this; conclusion strong yet gentle... and very clever, subtle rhymescheme. just great stuff, sire. :)"
    Posted by purr_verse on "appreciate" by knightmirror
  • "dammit, i wish i'd come up with 'whisperhaps' first. >:) great stuff. "be/foreshadowing lighted hearts": lovely... and i like the way this one concludes... gently powerful... very nice indeed. :) ...and i can kind of see the caterpillarness Monkey mention"
    Posted by purr_verse on "Raking Rain" by knightmirror
  • ""be/hindsight": that's awesome! please accept my petty envy. *smiles* ..and i agree with everyone who's already remarked on the excellence of the ending."
    Posted by purr_verse on "Withering" by knightmirror
  • "i'm afraid i have to offer you the banality of "wow" for the triad of lines beginning with "an entity" - that is just simply wonderful, powerful wording. "withinsecurities": fab wordmeld. :)"
    Posted by purr_verse on "7 Words Save Me" by knightmirror
  • "*warns of approaching banality*... wow. wow. this is excellent. the second stanza is awesome... great ending; lovely darkwrite...and quite possibly my favourite of your works. Gorgeous. :)"
    Posted by purr_verse on "Trip" by knightmirror
  • ""but i'm pretty sure by the smell of this paper,you'll know it's Dad"... this is a really touching line in a very touching piece... Daphne will love this when she's no longer too young to read, i'm sure. :) "
    Posted by purr_verse on "Be Happy 2-Day" by knightmirror
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