Comments by Magdalena
- "I sat at the side of a coffin for too long. It takes years before it really sinks in, that they don't come back,,, This is a beautiful crushing piece, I don't think love ever comes without hurt and loss, eventually, always.... Wonderful deep feeling writing. "
Posted by Magdalena on "heart/key" by slow.burn.star
- "The subconscious reminds us in dreams, albeit cryptically on the most part. How the mind tricks us. We can take it back. Great piece Phalanx. "
Posted by Magdalena on "Snapshot" by Phalanx
- "I miss you little lady. It's coming up to the anniversary of your passing. You would be so pleased to have POTD. always beautiful. xx"
Posted by Magdalena on "Melpomene" by Corinthian
- "Sorry to hear that. This one is for my father. He had dementia. It is a slow and cruel death. I couldn't watch him take his last breath, but always spent time with him before his last weeks in hospital. "
Posted by Magdalena on "the fading of you" by Magdalena
- "Happy birthday beautiful Angel... .
she hangs chandeliers
from quilt like clouds
Angel beads wrap her wrists
.
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the colour of stars
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with glitter hair that falls
like snow ribbons
...
the eternal dancer moving
in burgundy flowers
she has music from violins
and perfect lips
..
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Corinthian glimmers
through worlds and wonders"
Posted by Magdalena on " Corinthian the go go dancer " by Corinthian
- "Missing you little lady and your captivating writing. I keep a candle in the window and light it when it is dark. "
Posted by Magdalena on "excruciating" by anaksunamun
- "The man of many names whom I have read elsewhere, haha.... Nothing wrong with being spohisticated or a bitch, within reason, both together is quite the package... nice one D. "
Posted by Magdalena on "~Sophisticated Bitch~" by DemonsFire777
- "This is such a poignant piece, brings to mind my father, who was an introvert except when someone made him angry. Old school and very strict. It is four years this month since he passed away..... This is beautifully written Steve, thank you for sharing with us. "
Posted by Magdalena on "A good old man" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "Thank you all, this was part of a collaboration I did with a male friend for a competition. Much appreciated. "
Posted by Magdalena on "Bitter lake." by Magdalena
- "I came in just to comment on this captivating piece of writing... I lay in my bed and at times I would feel the cold pierce my pores and the brush of breath against my hair, in my alone-ness. I had a dream once that I have to tell you about.. I connected with your wonderful writing my beautiful friend. "
Posted by Magdalena on "pallor" by anaksunamun
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