Comments by FadedBlues
- "...I was amazed to see you post something so personal. it took you two years to write this. my wish is that it brings you some relief, but it will probably take a lot longer..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Jaxon" by SaintNHB
- "...sounds like a lazy or possibly hungover morning after a night of too much partying or conversely, a night of lonely contemolation & over-smoking. your poem allows for several interpretations, that's appealing. you can work on the structure or leave it as is, it's enjoyable reading..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Morning Delight" by SaintNHB
- "...I'm hoping this is purely fiction, Saint, bc it's very good. questions won't help you survive, & the answers are probably not worth hearing..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Had You Known" by SaintNHB
- "...always seeking further knowledge, pursuing it at lightspeed. be careful w/those Icarus wings... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "Blood Lifted" by SaintNHB
- "Saint, this so artistically sings the Vampire's spirit. I'd like to see you edit 'I would never screw' to 'I would never deny you' or 'I would never eschew'. just a little constructive interfering. & I see slight infuence from Cummings in the 'dance' stanza, which is wonderful... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "Hells Retreat" by SaintNHB
- "Saint, burning bridges for a positive purpose is very clever, I've never seen that concept described before..."the living" here can be considered those in so-called 'normal' society..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "The Living Call Me A Freak." by SaintNHB
