Morning Delight

By SaintNHB

The shades are barely open
the sun is drifting through
showing dust on the panels
and floating about the room

Ashes litter carpet
the ashtrays overflowed
squished filters in scratched glass
toppled over like carcass bones

My teacup is chipped and cracked
Fine china at its best
I dunk the bag and let it steep
and put my hand down to rest-
carelessly on my knee
I watch the honey dissipate
and wish I was a bee
So I could float along the aroma
of a flower frenzied sea

And Edgar Allan Poe is coming back to me
Turning flowers into stones -
flavoring my tea

-SaintNHB

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Copyright 2013 SaintNHB
Published on Thursday, October 10, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I know my stanzas arent perfect... definitly need to learn how to properly put together a piece.
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  • FadedBlues On Thursday, October 10, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...sounds like a lazy or possibly hungover morning after a night of too much partying or conversely, a night of lonely contemolation & over-smoking. your poem allows for several interpretations, that's appealing. you can work on the structure or leave it as is, it's enjoyable reading...

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, October 10, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    *contemplation*

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