Comments by whisperingwalls

" With that being said, this piece should be taken in all seriousness. I read your mother tongue was Spanish, so here are a few typos I noticed: imminent* Rememberance* as opposed to remember. sown* as opposed to sowned. I would choose call (fall of the scythe) as opposed to roar; A poet should be definitive... but that is only my opinion. Overcome* no need for (s) Once again, powerful work.. clear these typos and the read will be much smoother and able to appreciate the content."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Soho Mihi!" by Nimue44

"Felt as if the poem was speaking to me, pulling me in, rather than a simple read. Kept me enthralled throughout. "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Soho Mihi!" by Nimue44

""They will realize that time and wind are cunning thieves." Enthralling work, pristine flow that allows the content to mesmerize"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Cunning Waltz" by Nimue44

"The flower took some skill, just saying."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Traveling Astoria." by Malice In Wonderland

"enjoyed the syntax, shows an intellect that when mixed with longing and stark pain creates a striking piece. Sculpted*"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "I CAN HEAR THEM CALLING !!!! " by Dark Chocolate

"The fact that your poetry is not more viewed and prevalent is saddening. Read a few and plan on setting some time aside. You are a true artist; never forget."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Say goodbye to the bored room or we were not meant to linger" by aquiouss

"Powerful; Leaves you guessing. "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "It's whatever" by SickSanityJenn

"You are too kind. Glad to see you kicking around again, going to start posting wth regularity september (new laptop)."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Checkmate and the Sea" by whisperingwalls

"frightening as a whole. well done."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "three lines" by Bashost

"enjoyed your choices in diction. An advanced lexicon is evident."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Mon Coeur" by Strataic

"Wow, this is powerful poetry, you painted the scene as if I was looking through your eyes, and the emotion was wrenching. well done "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "lipstick stain on the teddy bear." by Star

"enjoyed reading this piece, had depth and some wise observations."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "The Pine Barrens " by saltyman65

"Thought provoking. Made me question my worth from a different perspective, which I hope comes across as a powerful compliment."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "H*dl=I" by TropicalSnowstorm

"This is powerful, strikes like an anvil with the last line. Clearly there is enlightenment through your plight, But also a strong sense of burden."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "If Prophecies Are for Madmen..." by Mathesix

"I agree with the previous comment, this is the third work i've read and you are a multi-faceted poet. I enjoy the format with which you convey, and the unique imagery you use to express powerful and gripping emotions. I think I'm becoming a fan :p."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "jupiter" by anaksunamun

"Glad you enjoyed this work, I love the beauty and elegance I was able to bring out of the dark. "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"A beautiful stand of the soul. "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "I Will Let You Go" by cre

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