Comments by dwells
- "This was quite the Nature piece and very well done. Especially enjoyed the first part, prior to Adam and Eve from the dark side, but then their progeny have certainly caused some Hell on earth. Thanks for posting this."
Posted by dwells on "Natural Show" by Dragonfly
- "Last five lines could use a little work on the forced rhymes I think, but I really enjoyed reading this. It was suggestively erotic and titillating, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Garden" by Dragonfly
- "Sorry about your friend, sounds like his buddies pulled the rug out from under him? Good simile going on here, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Willow Tree" by Dragonfly
- "Way to go Barney, you horny pleezeyousaurus! This was so poetically perfect, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Mine" by Dragonfly
- "Fabulous simile with the book and one note if I may - "python" line should end with "pleas" I think? Excellent work here, thanks PD (Barney maybe?)."
Posted by dwells on "A Boy Made of Lies" by Dragonfly
- "I think your faith is ironclad in spite of these doubts and protestations, because nothing else can explain us as we are - except for some omnipotent presence. Thanks for sharing this."
Posted by dwells on "FAITH...less" by Dragonfly
- "The power of words and the effect they have over us can be narcotic, thanks for this dark offering."
Posted by dwells on "Fill me" by Dragonfly
- "A bleak view with some on-target insights, but then some things never change very much through the years."
Posted by dwells on "America" by Dragonfly
- "Ultimatums are tricky things sometimes, especially as we wonder about "the road not taken" (with 20-20 hindsight). Thanks for sharing this. "
Posted by dwells on "Mary Jane" by Dragonfly
- "Thoughtful proposition unless perhaps you actually found yourself? Only time is lost in the end, and lost time is like lost money, it never comes back to you - now I'm depressed! Thanks. "
Posted by dwells on "Lost" by Dragonfly
