Some kind of sick, sick Revelation

By Dragonfly

This is some kind of revelation
Worthy of those who overthrow kings
Something similar to those kind of dreams
In which you never awake

I lie tangled in a sweaty mess
of lies and lust and life
of you and that single light
in which i hope to fall

And I submit you to my future dreams and goals
of which i never reach
and with you I can as I suck your soul desperate as a leach
you really do want me as far as I can see

Today I truly fell for you
as I curled into your back
and smiled as you looked at me with no luster ever lacked
then I know I've deceived you

What started as a intricate plan
is now a fools run cold
and now maybe I can see you and me growing old
but only if you want to

You sicken me with love
sweet enough to taste
and make me feel as if my life is just another waste
yet to this sweetness I have become addicted

And curled into your backside
I wrap my arms around
your tiny little torso and you smile without a sound
I think that I could stay like this.

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Copyright 2011 purpleydinos
Published on Friday, November 4, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Just Dave On Tuesday, January 30, 2018, Just Dave (448)By person wrote:

    Bitter sweet poem. And God yes some people can be so positive it can make you want to hurl. Great write. JD

  • Devilish On Thursday, March 1, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    You sicken me with love sweet enough to taste and make me feel as if my life is just another waste yet to this sweetness I have become addicted ... Fuckin priceless... Hello there you.. I have got a hell of a lot of catchin up to do... i will read one poem a day of yours.. untill im all caught up. glad to see you. Scholar

  • Devilish On Sunday, November 6, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Mmmmmm... Oh how I looove to read you... I'll be following you around from now on... Oh how many people will read this comment and say.. good luck! Or mail you giving you advice, to steer clear... Lol.. I'm a faithful bitch and I lovvvve this talent here loveee... see ya soon..:)... Oh that's me drooling... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: You know what, welcome to DP. sorry about my lacking comment. Its nice to see someone with measurable talent walk through our doors for once though Scholar

  • dwells On Friday, November 4, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Sounds like you are re-thinking your future dreams and goals maybe? Lovely poem and thanks.

  • A former member wrote: Very deep, and dark. I like the reach for the words, like you're slowly spinning this web of intricate design. Very nice, excellent write.

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