Comments by dwells
- "We do the best we can, we move on, and we beg forgiveness in atonement for the unforgivable, cheers and we all have our baggage to bear, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "The Coast" by HeadpatSlut
- "The Skalds were the savages who sometimes fought and lived amongst the Vikings as they visited foreign lands. But maybe a video game too (some of the lingo sounded in that genre). VERY INTERESTING...thanks DK6"
Posted by dwells on "Balder's Wake" by HeadpatSlut
- "Would have preferred some lines of repeating, or equal length to get the feel of the metrics maybe. Nevertheless a fine read and powerfully proclaimed, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Iron Heart" by HeadpatSlut
- "Smoke those damn chains away, and the invisible ones are the most hardened. Cheers DK-6"
Posted by dwells on "Chainsmoke" by HeadpatSlut
- "Anything but Erik, almost killed a friend of mine (if even still sold).
We all gotta have our vices - be thankful for the smokes, cool piece bro!"
Posted by dwells on "Chainsmoke" by HeadpatSlut
- "Blackened redfish is great but then so is most Louisiana cajun cooking, sounds like you got a good thing going there, spicy!"
Posted by dwells on "Blackened Angel" by HeadpatSlut
- "Guess she'll always be looking down on you then and much enjoyed the elemental nature of this tribute, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "A Hymn of Hope" by HeadpatSlut
- "Won't return to the good ways? We all give up those things along the way, that only look good in the rearview mirror. Hope this was cathartic for you - how's the beach today?"
Posted by dwells on "Absolute Oblivion" by HeadpatSlut
- "DK6 - humbly suggest a tweak to the last line if I understand the thrust (no pun intended) "Because my blade has turned on me" - that is to assume that this is seppuku / suicide. Just an idea from a backset driver. Overall this was reminiscent of the heroic style of old and thanks for the tale sir."
Posted by dwells on "Warrior's Redemption" by HeadpatSlut
- "Sounds like "that bastard" might think of you too as a worst enemy. A death fantasy, hmm.. are you incarcerated maybe? Interesting write, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "My Worst Enemy" by HeadpatSlut
