Comments by kinkifrog

"I sometimes wonder if I knew then what I know now ... I'm not sure that would have helped...is fore-warned fore-armed or maybe completely crushing...your created language is masterful , much conveyed with such poetic precision"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Hatchet-shaped hole in a heart-shaped world" by cadymae

"maybe the vitriol in your pen will do the trick.Positively scathing..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Sizzle Stick" by cadymae

"... yikes ... wicked piece ... :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Hate eats life" by cadymae

"you have a real knack for depicting and framing a complex set of emotions..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "The bondification of affection" by cadymae

"I must ask my daughter if she feels this way ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "biracial harmonies" by cadymae

"just one big ,homologous , amorphous slurry ... the language is not the only thing corrupted..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Melted in the pot" by cadymae

"I'm the dragon and I love that weird little beardy dude :P ... this poem makes me go awwww on the inside..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "pulsing affinities" by cadymae

"there's no white-washing the past from the eyes of Karma ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "the banshee's castle" by cadymae

"the fact that the energy is 'coiling' seems it is sentient in itself , waiting to be aroused and strike ... the bottom of a quiver ( near the arrow tips ) is a fine place for it to lie along with other points of power and it comes for walks with you... s-s-s-surreptitiously... I got the sense of older folks perhaps couples whose combined energy and strength is that of a sleepy almost hibernating snake...this energy tracks each like a comforting surveillance... heh...I'm way off , right? ... thanks for baffling me :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Lizard Mind: Fieldwork - Notebook /3, Observation/10" by cadymae

"I felt like I was watching Miss Mary reminiscing ... deliciously bright with sunshine and citrus ... I love the laughing air and the sound of the ice cubes; of a far away dappled Spring ... or perhaps a personal memory ... either way , that ray of sunshine sure travels ... thank you :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Blooming on the decline" by cadymae

"oh yes... I love Whitman's advice there ( was it?)...always carry a pen or work out where the voice recorder is on your phone to save writing when driving...although , using a mobile while driving is probably just as dangerous ... Thanks !"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Lost in distractions" by cadymae

"the first line cracked me up but then what followed was more sobering...I wonder about these things too...that last line left me with a depressing graph in my head ... if only the decline were as much fun as a slippery slide... "
Posted by kinkifrog on "Why?" by cadymae

"youst to? ... what does that even mean..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Get off my lawn" by cadymae

"I used to steal your roses...:)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Get off my lawn" by cadymae

"maybe the only way to go is like Phineas Freak ... amusing musings with a twist...thanks :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on " Phreaking at the State Fair" by cadymae

" that's brilliant with a dark light ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "The ruination of the little black Tarn" by cadymae

"debrides is a very powerful word to use in this context...almost like a surgical removal of some weighty dross , humid and cloying...you sound sapped...~hands over a nice chilled orange~"
Posted by kinkifrog on "June deBrides Engagement" by cadymae

"a real "bottler" of a poem ... there is a hopeful 'against all odds' feeling to this piece...very well done..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Flotsam" by cadymae

"................O! ............. ... it's a bargain ;)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Newborn and trembling" by cadymae