Phreaking at the State Fair
By cadymae
First prize to pick out is patience
Things move at different speeds.
(Sounds obvious but you'll forget that.)
At the next booth
grab stillness
all garish pink n
wrapped in old cellophane
Let the thing in the high-back
controller chair steer for
a bit.
You will end up in
wholly unexpected places
o n
d
i g totally
unexpected
things
Psssst: Keep alertness in your ruler pocket
you might have completely misudged
everything
Finally
just before the peak
take your hands off entirely
ride
the ride
you paid the man already
(That little fucker can run, huh!)
Just say you lost it at
the fair
and hope no one was standing
on the scaffolding
midway taking
pictures of you on your down-slope
not
noticing your own arc of descent.
Soooo distracted by your
own screaming fun,
as you dropped down into the lights
of wierdo hour at the State Fair
Comments on " Phreaking at the State Fair"
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A former member wrote:
I can feel the chaos in the scene, some sick imagery
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On Monday, November 26, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...I like the carnival atmosphere, but I feel the disillusion...
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On Tuesday, November 27, 2012, cadymae
(73) wrote:
Nice reply. :) Thanks all!
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On Monday, November 26, 2012, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
There's whimsy, advice and more than just a little ounce of truth in these lines all wrapped up in a rollicking good metaphor..Really nice work here.