Newborn and trembling
By cadymae
Fragile new life clings by its sucker
trembling when gusts blast
by,
turning this way and that,
drawing sustenance,
buffeted
by circumstance.
Fresh-birthed sensitivites,
quivering
when touched by the other,
as if each of those touches permeates
the freshly born outer shell.
Skin awakens anew each shiver.
When stillness arrives, unwelcomed,
the buffeting is longed
for again, instantly.
To sleep in the eye of that storm, lulled
by suckling, would be ecstasy.
You don't exit the whirlpool
the same as you went in.
But that price is low
for the high
returned.
O!
For W. A.
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Copyright 2012 cadymae
Published on Monday, May 21, 2012.
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On Wednesday, May 23, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...well crafted, which is the norm for you. I'm enjoying the ride in the whirlpool...
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On Wednesday, May 23, 2012, cadymae
(73) wrote:
Thank you for your kind words. I hope the whirlpool is as sweet to you are it is being to me right now. ;)
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On Monday, May 21, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Not sure if this fine piece is written from a mother's point of view, or pehaps the child's? Works either way for me, and thanks Cadymae.
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On Tuesday, May 22, 2012, cadymae
(73) wrote:
It is written from the perspective of a lover who has just been slayed by a master in the bedroom.
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On Wednesday, May 23, 2012, cadymae
(73) wrote:
You've made me rethink using the word suckle in any other context except maternally though. Those of us who are kid-free by choice don't automatically think of that but we are the minority so....