Comments by Ears2hearyou
- "Loved it...the creator, mother of
spiritual meaning...oh my you truly
gave it life!
wonderful, wonderful!
last line brillant!
(I was kind of wishing that
you would have formatted this
with a touch more air..for your
lines are so lovely to enjoy
we wanted to pause upon and
sip them as fine wine.
ears/Seattle
very inspiring writing!
"
Posted by Ears2hearyou on "the Loop of Life" by tinkdarkchyld
- "this poem really gives a lot to chew
on...I have never thought of it...
a conversation with my cervix!
(lol)
way to write!
"
Posted by Ears2hearyou on "Cervix" by PaYaSiN
- "giggle..thanks..I have a dark irish
muse that likes to take "recess"
breaks!
thanks for your comment!
flushing the old soul pipes!"
Posted by Ears2hearyou on "Good Day" by Ears2hearyou
- "giggle...naughty poet!
you couldn't help but smile and laugh
with this great poem.
psst...your muse is showing dear!
how sneaky of you...i find that if we
don't let our muse out...occassionally..
we have a tendency to "implode"
and we all know just how messy tht
can be!
giggle.
ears/Seattle way to write!
"
Posted by Ears2hearyou on "I'd take a handjob at this point" by Sealed Identity
- "I love dark and minimal poetry...
you did this wonderfully!
Which one will make "you" sorry!
ears/Seattle
a touch of unspoken angst or compassion
wide open for intrepretation.
the beauty of minimal poetry!
way to write it!
ears
"
Posted by Ears2hearyou on "Two Paths" by Gaz
- "wickedly beautiful, poetic brillance!
you just couldn't help but love it
way to write!
ears/Seattle
I think of my favorite freedoms
in dark writing is that..we as
dark writers can "ply" the layers
and textures "not" enslaved to the
structures or formats as some of
the other genre's are...this is
a fine example of that...the writer
allowing the ink...to...Free, consume,
control, and release!
loved it!"
Posted by Ears2hearyou on "Vulgar.Hands.Undress" by BeautifulCalamity
- "loved it!
well done!
clever too...regret leaves anyways...
I wrote a similiar poem to this...
after 8 yrs. of hating my ex-
I called it...Dear Hate your're
fired...you simply can't get the job
done...thankyou for your steadfast
loyalty, however it is clear you
are simply making me tired and weary.
Good luck in your next endeavor.
If you need references, please feel
free to call me.
Sincerely,
Kathleen
p.s. Please don't forget to take
yourinflated ego on the way out!
I was really sick and tired of
hate...
I loved your poem!
way to write it so perfectly!
"
Posted by Ears2hearyou on "Hate" by eske
- "damn..i think i got a fat lip just from
reading it!
wow..you moved us fast and tight,
I felt like I had to hold on to my
chair as you raced us through the room
and threw us into the Cage with you.
I enjoyed your ending too...touch
of humor....I thought to myself
damn...i guess there is something to
a calm and meek life!
lovely writing, very powerful!
you controlled the flow amazingly!
It forced us to journey with you
close to your side. Feeling and tasting
every sensation.
well done!
ears/Seattle
I usually write with a little more
air but you really clung to us
and it was a heck of an adventure!
"
Posted by Ears2hearyou on "Blackout Rumble" by Soldier Of Silence
- "Applause-Applause-Applause!
Fabulous writing...we were glued to
your every line!
This must of been heaven to write!
We should all be required to read
this once a year...for denial has
nails and don't if they chip once
in a while.
Fabulous Writing!
ears2hearyou/Seattle
"
Posted by Ears2hearyou on "His Big Bloody Secret" by RubyXero
