Comments by nur hidayah
- "No wonder people keep thinking I'm a boy! *contemplates worriedly* It means bird in Malay though."
Posted by nur hidayah on "Dua" by inexperienced
- "I meant to comment on this much much earlier when you first posted it but I got so lost in it I kept forgetting! Anyway, this moved me. Really. Paradise. Home. This moved me."
Posted by nur hidayah on "You." by asphyxia
- "...You work rhymes like no other and I have always admired your works. And that siren's song...! I love that. Actually, though the story is very different, this reminded me of 'The Mariner's Revenge' by the Decemberists. Yours could make a better song tho"
Posted by nur hidayah on "The Sailor's Lament" by RhymeBound
- "Absolutely lovely. I feel this poem like a "butterfly smeared upon fingers". The delicate magical dust, the quiet thought of death and ugliness... This is Yay. I apologise for the lack of articulacy. :P"
Posted by nur hidayah on "Smeared Colors" by DarkDruidess
- "It started out very promising. I love the first stanza. Wish you expanded more on this though. "
Posted by nur hidayah on "Hypnotize" by Rhys Ki
- "The chill of night, wet grass, unheard pounding music...I really like this poem, Liz. The rhymes were just right and the rhythm made it so pleasant on the tongue. And the story... I do adore this so."
Posted by nur hidayah on "The Rebellious Mexican Rock Band Singer" by Liz
- "Who isn't, elisa? People can be idiotic conformists. The sad thing is, they succeed in bringing people down with them. Jo, it's great you don't let them do that to you. Don't feel too bad about it. They're not even worth it. =)"
Posted by nur hidayah on "journal.entry" by asphyxia
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