The Shrieking Colours

By nur hidayah

The Shrieking Colours




Dear Uncle,

Have you always seen the world fragmented
in neat squares
worrying, wondering when
the pieces will grind and slip and render
everything unrecognisable?

Or do you covet the madness of line-free glory?


Colours
kissing meshing pressing
against one another
screaming,
life!
Life.


And...
When Wak Wan swung open your cage
with wild eyes,
is that why you leapt out
your shrieks blending
with the bright, watching colours
of an uncut world,
tearing at his face
your eyes laughing
at all the roaring red?
At all the swaying whispering green?
At the insane ominescent blue?


And... And...
When he shot you dead
did the colours
did the colours
did they melt into you
did they clash
collapse and hum
into a glorious disquiet?


Did you see
dear Uncle,
were you finally free?

















In memory of Boboy, a monkey adopted as a son by my grandaunt. He was killed by my grandaunt's brother who, rumour has it, was on his way to killing Boboy anyway because of a prior unfortunate incident involving a precious stone.

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© 2007 Nuri
Published on Sunday, July 8, 2007.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Graphic Art"
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  • FadedBlues On Wednesday, July 17, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...it's interesting & proper that you treat like a human presence, describing the passing of a beloved family member. I hope you visit here occasionally...

  • A former member wrote: I'm not sure what to make of this piece..but the odd nature of it(even here) makes it very intriguing..I really like this piece

  • blue On Monday, July 15, 2013, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    I must say, this was intriguingly disturbing to say the least. This hsd an uneasy building energy to it... insane omnicient blue!?! Perhaps the three most perfectly placed words I've read in a long while. You've crafted and captured the macabre scenery of the situation quite remarkably. Well derserving of Poem of the Day, let alone the classification of dark poetry. ~b

  • A former member wrote: I haven't read this for quite some time; Boboy still lives in these words.......

  • Mari On Friday, December 21, 2007, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    i.. yeah.. .it was awesome. reminds me kind of mcLeans starry starry night

  • A former member wrote: your artistry knows no bounds...I've read this before and and still don't have the words to express what your writing does to me.

  • flying_fox On Wednesday, July 18, 2007, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    that just broke my heart. The write was wonderful - evocative, emotive, transient. All great things. But the monkey in the cage is what shatters me...

  • asphyxia On Thursday, July 12, 2007, asphyxia (56)By person wrote:

    thank you nuri for the great comment :)

  • Mylissa On Wednesday, July 11, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    WOW what a great picture and poem....you are amazing.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, July 11, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    Get that monkey out of it's cage!

  • asphyxia On Monday, July 9, 2007, asphyxia (56)By person wrote:

    ...thats terrible!!

  • A former member wrote: whats piercing me are his eyes. .. tragic

  • Moonflower On Sunday, July 8, 2007, Moonflower (298)By person wrote:

    that is fucking amazing. its just so unique, man. and i love the pic with it, it made it alot better. just wonderful! =)

  • A former member wrote: boboy.. isn't that a filipino name?

  • nur hidayah On Sunday, July 8, 2007, nur hidayah (114)By person wrote:

    I don't think so, no. We're not filipino

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