Comments by zanewill
- "holy mother of god>> this evoked an
unexpected GUSH of breath leaving my body, yet attacking itself..>>>
HOlymotherOFcHristoS>>> UR so wonderfuly
eloquently intensely passionately>>
profane & equisitely unique in the
conjuring of wordplay...Excellent"
Posted by zanewill on "abuelo [tatuajes y memorias]" by Six-Out
- "Run Rhyme run!!LOL !!*>> this sic-
little ditty will get u going real
quickly..I am definately SKEERED!
rock on write on don't loose hard on>>
i love asunder & askew..languid
luscious soulless silent"
Posted by zanewill on "Run" by jack paper
- ""laced in temp. psychosis" HA! i'v always considered most haikus' Hydraulic
i read this over & over!!!
2coolTerminal-balew. Bazil Zerinsky!!
what a great name>>>>>>>"
Posted by zanewill on "terminal blue" by verablue
- "wow, dude- this is incredible!
the secret is: do U know them!LOL
thanx for bookmarking me- UR on mine2
write on Bro"
Posted by zanewill on "Schizo" by Disassembly Boy
- "hey hat/han-if u were as u try & appear,
i would think u would not get off on the
tedious business of this poetry site!!
LOL!!!u'd B out stabbing some poor kid.
seriously, i'm just fuckin w/ U. if U
need 2 torture, share 1st..."
Posted by zanewill on "The Predator" by HattoriHanzo
- "there is no punishment for the truly
sick & weary of soul, but existence with
themselves. death is something I think
one should "relax into"...the burning
horrible inside is only extinguished by
insanely brave hearts!!!GOOD write/luck"
Posted by zanewill on "The Predator" by HattoriHanzo
- "when u go over that last edge/ledge of
sanity/there's no goin back usually. we write hopefully to provide a flimsy barrier to that last jump. i love it!!!"
Posted by zanewill on "romance is a cripple." by Lynaes
- "very profound that this came from the same place as the sick man. thanx for ur comment on my stuff.
write-on"
Posted by zanewill on "Broken" by HattoriHanzo
- "the stag is the greenman consecrated
with the goddess in ritual. probabley very
celtic since that's the Druid origin. it's kind of archytipical/symbolic imagery,,consecration & affirmation of nature?!>>>>>>>>"
Posted by zanewill on "Anabel-lee in the tree" by zanewill
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