Log In
The Predator
By HattoriHanzo
Under this mossy oak break up coat
A monster lies dormant as the ghost.
Sleeping serpent beneath black waters
Fathoms below your boat…
Not very far from your little girl
In a sick yet disheartening world,
Listening to laughter as she swings
Watching her as she twirls…
Conformity among many men,
It’s with great ease do I so pretend.
Midnight stalker of your beloved
Innocence I befriend…
Will god forgive me for what I’ve done
When my ultimate judgment has come?
Awaiting my sentence I tremble
Burning amongst the sun…
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
© 2007 HattoriHanzo
Comments on "The Predator"
Log in to post comments.
-
On Monday, May 2, 2011, Devilish
(2657)
wrote:
U don't need to explain yourself to anybody! It is what it is! I fuckin love it! Release the demon, WE ALL HAVE ONE OR SOME!!!
-
On Thursday, February 15, 2007, HattoriHanzo
(21) wrote:
thx Insanity. the # of syllables are uniformed but for sum reason i think the last stanza soundz shOrt and weird. o well, sumtimes syllable soundZ can B deceiving i think.
-
A former member wrote:
oh nice flow to this. Welcome to DP. ][ ][
-
On Thursday, February 15, 2007, HattoriHanzo
(21) wrote:
...on the other hand this isnt a farce cuz my writing TRULY cums from me. i like your comment Zane- but im not THAT bad :-)
-
On Thursday, February 15, 2007, HattoriHanzo
(21) wrote:
thx for the comments. if its disturbing and you DONT like it than i think thats still ok. some of the thingz i write, im drawing from my own feelings and amplifying them for dramatic effect so-2-speak, but i hope i dont worry anyone. on the other hand thi
-
On Thursday, February 15, 2007, nur hidayah
(116) wrote:
yeah, i agree with Seraphim about him being a pedophile. i can almost hear him breathing heavily as he watches the girl. i can almost hear her screams. sad write. -Nuri
-
On Thursday, February 15, 2007, zanewill
(84) wrote:
hey hat/han-if u were as u try & appear, i would think u would not get off on the tedious business of this poetry site!! LOL!!!u'd B out stabbing some poor kid. seriously, i'm just fuckin w/ U. if U need 2 torture, share 1st...
-
On Thursday, February 15, 2007, zanewill
(84) wrote:
there is no punishment for the truly sick & weary of soul, but existence with themselves. death is something I think one should "relax into"...the burning horrible inside is only extinguished by insanely brave hearts!!!GOOD write/luck
-
On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, Sin
(1168) wrote:
this turned my stomache..reminded me of a pedophile stalking his prey
HattoriHanzo's Latest Works Feed
Join