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Demons in Her Eyes.
By lstdarkness
[I Freeze.]
Her cold stare sends
chills through the air.
I see my breathe
float toward the sky.
Her stare reflects my
the wrongs I
have committed.
[I Struggle.]
The demons in her looks
force me to the ground.
The burden of my conscience
pushes me further down.
I can not stand the weight
of her glare.
[I choke.]
The words stuck
in my mind like
the vice like grip of her eyes
focused in my failure.
I try to tell her
the wrongs I committed.
I cannot give her the
assurance she demands.
[I die.]
The demons in her eyes
demand my demise.
Turning to stone from
the eyes of Medusa,
would be a welcome release.
She watches as I am lowered
to the ground the last time.
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© 2007 lstdarkness
Published on Friday, February 9, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, March 3, 2007, GraveFlower
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wrote:
wow, you can really feel the struggle and pain, i can actually picture her eyes piercing through me, with a grip on my life...then relief that she puts me on the ground, even tho its the last time...fuckin aweseme write man! ~*dani*~
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On Tuesday, February 20, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
THESE WOULD BE BAD ASS LYRICS!
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On Sunday, February 11, 2007, Tania
(197) wrote:
i missed this!great write.
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A former member wrote:
Really enjoyed this. Nice stucture
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On Friday, February 9, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
I do like this.
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On Friday, February 9, 2007, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
This was incredible... I can't believe I haven't scanned through your works yet if I have then I'm sorely disappointed I haven't bookmarked any.. This was.. wow ~mirrored Nymph
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A former member wrote:
i somehow find myself identified even though in this case I'm "her", I really can understand where your coming from cuz i give that kind of stare.. really great
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On Friday, February 9, 2007, zanewill
(84) wrote:
stark & very raw! i like it!!!
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