Comments by All Members
- "a totally different take on Mothers Day huh, more biting and gritty, some strong emotional pernicious expressions. Tough talking cookie-crumbling mayhem -wowsers!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Mother..." by TornPaperDoll
- "hmmmm what a tragic and premptive something between us... a rupture of sorts that you've delicately expessed as that which divides though unseen.."
Posted by Unknown on "Between Us" by TornPaperDoll
- "last line reminds me of Notting Hill movie ha ha- ahhh Julia Roberts -wowo, soory about that momentary distraction. This poem is drenched in break up sorrow. "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "When She's Gone" by TornPaperDoll
- "I feel this all the way. Some guys just don't realize. Great write, love the phrase "aint no sunshine when she's gone" because we all know its true. :) ~*~Tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "When She's Gone" by TornPaperDoll
- "Wonderfully magnificent my sweets, such vivid imagery and such beauty in the words, you are beutiful and you will always be, your looks your personality and your talent, simply splendid, :) great job ~Josh~"
Posted by Emptyness Inside Me on "Pretty Girl" by TornPaperDoll
- "That m'dear... "IS" beauty! *claps* Wonderful piece... really just wonderful. I believe all women know those feelings all too well. Thank you! Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Pretty Girl" by TornPaperDoll
- "So powerful and honest, such raw emotions here, as always I am almosst left speachless, your way of words just intrigues me so, I wish I had half your talent Amanda Great Job ~Josh~"
Posted by Emptyness Inside Me on "Please Explain" by TornPaperDoll
- "This was excellent. I loved the ending here too. My husband always talks about "HER" and tells her that if he weren't married he'd be all hers. It kinda makes me wonder. Great write!"
Posted by Kainoa on "He Wants Her" by TornPaperDoll
- "I agree with Bold...I loved the ending...I haven't read much of your stuff, but i love the things i have read so far...keep up the good work."
Posted by Kainoa on "Tell Me Why" by TornPaperDoll
- "I also relate to this...My boyfriend/husband and i just got inot a big argument about one of his exes that he still keeps in touch with. everyone says they started meesing around again and when i asked him to tell me the truth he said he didn't NEED me an"
Posted by Kainoa on "Scrapbook of You" by TornPaperDoll
- "A broken human being always has someone to catch the pieces, be they friend, or stranger. Look inside to find the question, and ask for help to find the hidden things. Well written. - Michael"
Posted by BlackBear on "Another Broken Thing" by TornPaperDoll
- "I "Would help such a broken thing" - nobody is broken - we are different. Amazing write full of emotion and heart... so innocent in its reflection... great write."
Posted by Crimson Shade on "Another Broken Thing" by TornPaperDoll
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