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Between Us
By TornPaperDoll
I’m looking in his eyes
But I’m seeing you
My face is showing it
And he’s wondering who…
I’ve lost what I had
He’s lost almost all of me
And you’re standing between us
But it’s much too late for his begging plea
I don’t know who knows me better
Me or my heart
I’m not sure which man to take
The already known or the fresh start
He’s loved me good
You say you’d love me more
He’s touched so much in me
You say you’d touch me like never before
His love felt real fine
And I look forward to what yours would be
But I’m just a scared little girl
So, yours is a love I’ll never see.
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© 2006 TornPaperDoll
Published on Wednesday, May 10, 2006.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Between Us"
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A former member wrote:
I enjoyed this. I can relate almost too well right now..
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On Wednesday, May 17, 2006, Emptyness Inside Me
(171)
wrote:
A very tragic and painful display of what so many of us go through, the one we have always loved or the one who we know we would love even more? such a hard decision to make. A love we know will always be there, or a love we have no idea as to how long it
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On Wednesday, May 17, 2006, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
will last. very well written and described as always Amanda. great job o'talented one ~Josh~
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On Friday, May 12, 2006, Black_Cherry_Doll_
(69) wrote:
OMG! this was so brutally beautiful! I love it, going on *faves*!!! u r awesome!
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A former member wrote:
hmmmm what a tragic and premptive something between us... a rupture of sorts that you've delicately expessed as that which divides though unseen..
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