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When She's Gone
By TornPaperDoll
You don't want me to leave
You know there is nothing more
I have given more than you deserve
And now i'm standing at the door
Your dreams would soon fade
And life would cease to exist
And i know you know
That i'd be far more than just missed
I'm threatening you with me
More so, the absence of who i am
There is nothing you can do
And don't act like you don't give a damn
Your crying on the inside
Screaming for me to back away
And if you didn't sound so silly
There is so much that you would say
And just like the last man
And just like the song
Everybody knows it...
"Aint no sunshine when she's gone."
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© 2006 TornPaperDoll
Published on Tuesday, May 9, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, May 10, 2006, Dei
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wrote:
I have wanted to say this a few times indeed. well done.
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On Wednesday, May 10, 2006, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
Amazing write as always Amanda, so much truth in this its incredible. You always show your great talent in ever work. good job :) ~Josh~
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On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
I feel this all the way. Some guys just don't realize. Great write, love the phrase "aint no sunshine when she's gone" because we all know its true. :) ~*~Tart~*~
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