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"Good poem. I liked the part about 0 negative (cool band) and the last few lines of the poem really captivated me.....is still haunting me."
Posted by Unknown on "Recording everything...That never happened" by Dejected_Worth

"Awesome imagery and style, killer piece here. I love it. Thanks."
Posted by DarkSkies on "Nashville and purple hair" by Dejected_Worth

"Masterpiece! I love the repeated refrain of "subtle tones Of purple in your hair", offset against all the cheap, dirty, frenetic surroundings...and then linking the purple with those surroundings... Excellent job with this! I love how you can create a complete scene, storyline and mood so efficiently and eloquently. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Nashville and purple hair" by Dejected_Worth

"...a snapshot that you keep in your favorite book of poetry. an affair for one..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "For: who its obviously for" by Dejected_Worth

"Oh man . . . a double entendre of the best kind. Your arrangement is painstakingly fastidious- but somehow you manage to keep the flow breezing right "on my lips from your lips / ...soaked in the 80 proof morning after awkwardness" and "I hear no evil through perfect flesh / ...wonder if she is waiting still, where I left her to come here with you." Your emotion seeps through your words, truly. 10/10"
Posted by Unknown on "5:30 in Brandy's Arms" by Dejected_Worth

"What a sweet, complex longing this depicts. The internal struggle is so real and strong here. Captivating work as always. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "For: who its obviously for" by Dejected_Worth

"Love this, must be wonderful knowing someone both here and IRL"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Sleeping with 7th Grade English Teachers..." by Dejected_Worth

"This reaches in nicely; wicked inking :)~"
Posted by blue angel on "For: who its obviously for" by Dejected_Worth

"Enigmatic and this relationship sounds like a real handful. To worship from afar perhaps and await a moment's weakness. Then more waiting while coming to terms with reality - you gotta be you too, cheers and much enjoyed DW!"
Posted by dwells on "For: who its obviously for" by Dejected_Worth

"Judging a book by its cover - big mistake, especially when the screaming starts. But then again, small breasted women are the most ardent lovers - to which I'll attest - cheers DJ!"
Posted by dwells on "Altoids and Gin" by Dejected_Worth

"Mentos are so much better than Altoids, though. I like the tone of this, it's kinda gritty and gnarly and almost sensual. "
Posted by Amaryllis on "Altoids and Gin" by Dejected_Worth

"Hahaha. Hey now, I can be pretty damn intimidating with my a cups. :P Really enjoyed this tongue in cheek snippet. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "Altoids and Gin" by Dejected_Worth

"I know, right? She threw cheerwine on me"
Posted by Dejected_Worth on "Altoids and Gin" by Dejected_Worth

"...chasing the great Dream that pops like an overfilled balloon, which in itself reflects the greed of most men. very dramatic write... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "[If you need me] I'll be the puddle outside your highrise" by Dejected_Worth

"With the knowledge of what is done and what will be and the conscious-trench you'll live in between...perhaps she is not the one that is being punished here, perhaps it is you...."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Cheating during hurricanes (Mary's little sister)" by Dejected_Worth

"The self-deprecatory nature of this had me near tears (a good thing, in this context of emotive poetry) and longing to cradle the speaker in my arms. Stirring and outstanding. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by inhisbelly on "Cheating during hurricanes (Mary's little sister)" by Dejected_Worth

"this reminds me of the jungle by upton sinclair. i enjoyed it."
Posted by sadkingdom on "[If you need me] I'll be the puddle outside your highrise" by Dejected_Worth

"An excellent write, that second stanza in particular stood out to me "But loving me, just may be. the DUMBEST thing. you've ever done" Absolutely loved that line. "
Posted by Unknown on "Cheating during hurricanes (Mary's little sister)" by Dejected_Worth

"The grass is always greener on the other side... Also the concept of Adam & Eve and the garden of Eden, the only logical explanation is that it was designed to be a failure. Hypocrisy is fun right? Meh I have no respect for god, only fictitious character I really can't stand. An outstanding write though, really enjoyed it."
Posted by Unknown on "[If you need me] I'll be the puddle outside your highrise" by Dejected_Worth

"I love reading poetry that places me in it. Very descriptive. Thank you, cree"
Posted by Unknown on "5:30 in Brandy's Arms" by Dejected_Worth

"Thank you for the comments. The next installment of the sara chronicles was a little harder to put to paper. And even harder to admit to... which says alot for me"
Posted by Dejected_Worth on "Stealing Sara [December ten years ago]" by Dejected_Worth

"Not sugar coated but laced in salt, rather. I like the raw brazen tone. Yet, I sense a deeper need to transcend from the corrupted stables. :)~ "
Posted by blue angel on "Stealing Sara [December ten years ago]" by Dejected_Worth

"I love the scheme of this...haunting and bittersweet"
Posted by Unknown on "Stealing Sara [December ten years ago]" by Dejected_Worth

"Links well to the next corresponding poem. I think one of the most interesting parts about your work are the syntaxes- you seem to employ heavy use of periods to break up, refine, and divide your sentences, resulting in more prolific garnering of the emotion and correlating receipt of imagery. Love it!"
Posted by Unknown on "relapses are for lovers [sara in November]" by Dejected_Worth

"Man, I love this . . . it's so sick, but the fear is so evanescent. My favorite stanza is the one right before the last. . . I especially love the introduction to it (the last line of the stanza before)- and I think it's true to both nature and your feelings as the author. It's really an emotional piece and conjures clear mental images of the situation at hand, whatever that may be. I'm definitely interested in your work; I'm going to go check out the rest. Thanks for posting!"
Posted by Unknown on "Stealing Sara [December ten years ago]" by Dejected_Worth

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