Comments by All Members
- "The ending is a bit creepy, and I understand it completely. Honestly, being haunted by another is the worst kind of madness to suffer from. Great piece, I felt a good bit of the mixed emotions that are lingering behind: This is one of those pieces that are never fully finished, seems to me that there's more that you really wanted to write... Sometimes summing things up is best, pushes out those inner demons. -Curtseys "
Posted by soul_versing on "You are Still Here" by Stranger
- "Thank you for still posting once in a while. That third stanza is one of the most perfectly stripped-down poetic truths I've read in a very long time. It's like one of Rodin's hand sculptures, real as flesh but bite-sharp to the touch. Wonderful."
Posted by Carmina Gitana on "Real and Unreal" by Stranger
- "This is one of the best poems I have read in a while. Had me from the beginning to the very end. So erotic, yet...well...biblical. An interesting and effective blending of the two. Nice job!"
Posted by Unknown on "Missionary Position" by Stranger
- "the complications of sex and expectation, seen through a kaleidoscope of biblical allegory, the need for a saviour and master to guide the way when neither of you are really out of the lost and found box... trying to find guidance in another person, trying to absorb someone else's truth. this gave me a lot to think about! thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Missionary Position" by Stranger
- "She doesn't believe in magic, but you do magic, and both of you make magic. My brain hurts. Deliciously. "
Posted by Nimue44 on "The Magician" by Stranger
- "I came back to this piece via a link from brandi. It is still as striking as the first time I read it. Powerful"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Real and Unreal" by Stranger
- "Wow.. Just overwhelming!.. One can feel the emotions of your feelings in every stanza.. Confessions are a good thing to release the soul from its weight.. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Three Confessions" by Stranger
- "Amazing piece.. Tantalizing and romantic words.. Without falling fall in vulgarity like many others "writings" that I've read before.. Great work! :)"
Posted by Unknown on "This is Longing" by Stranger
- "This is a powerful and tantalizing piece! I'm glad that I found it.. I have to read more from you.. Such a delightful piece of art deserves to be worshiped and bookmarked! :) "
Posted by Unknown on "Missionary Position" by Stranger
- "Where do you come from?! This is so different. Most of your writing is. Far from what I'm used to. I love the way your mind works. This one took a while to sink in but shit... brilliant. "
Posted by Cantara on "One of Us..." by Stranger
- "I understand this to mean that the bad day is referring to your personal/physical/mental strain rather than the writing of the poem. Your pain and strain had taken over and all came together to the point of intensity that it sang out and directed this rhyme to speak for it because it was of such strength to be able to do so and make itself heard. "
Posted by Cantara on "My Body Lightly Rhyming on a Bad Day" by Stranger
- "This is such a heavy write and I'm not sure that I understand it. I'm terrified to comment on it. One part I am confident about and connect with are the final three lines... I will be back here for a few more reads...."
Posted by Cantara on "Three Confessions" by Stranger
- "An interesting recurring theme of overcoming the distance and over familiarity that grows with time in life long partnerships. The ability to renew.... and feel the thrill of uniting as strangers once again. "
Posted by Cantara on "Musing" by Stranger
- "I've never been drawn into such vivid images that actually took on a life of their own like I have here. The egg growing, bars of teeth constricting, black claw reaching.... all transforming and performing on their own before me. Pulling me deeply into their hypnosis. Just that one layer of this poem was majick in itself. I'm in awe."
Posted by Cantara on "The Magician" by Stranger
- "Knowing the precepts and intonation of love..... You have spoken well.... In your prose ..... Well done my old friend.... Well done......urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "Real and Unreal" by Stranger
- "I like the way you live and die in your words. Calculating response for words and sighs that like the pain. You know just what to say. You like being ugly. Bad noise is sometimes the greatest love song."
Posted by Phalanx on "Real and Unreal" by Stranger
- "Why has it taken me so long to find you! Such original ideas and interesting topics in general. This was great to read. Couldn't read it fast enough! Just wanted more and more. "
Posted by Cantara on "Missionary Position" by Stranger
- "This is fucking beautiful! I just love what the dagger and collar symbolise. And the illusions we have about those we have illusions of loving... you've left me speechless. Bookmarking! ☆ I also just really appreciate the simple approach you took with your language use. It makes greater impact of what you are saying. I just can't give enough praise for this. "
Posted by Cantara on "Real and Unreal" by Stranger
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