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  • "Wish everyone did this. Can I make this the tenets of something? I imagine an army reciting this preparing for war, and then, after getting over with it, finally deciding not to go. It was a great image. Thank you."
    Posted by Nimue44 on "Free Will" by HeadpatSlut
  • "My oh my- I had never read something like this. For someone that loves music, metal and Poe, I can tell you this rocks. Every word is still throbbing... I'm sorry for your loss."
    Posted by Nimue44 on "Lenore" by HeadpatSlut
  • "This style of writing really piques my interest to look up what you are referencing to."
    Posted by Unknown on "Fyrdraca" by HeadpatSlut
  • "A song sung in the chills of dark times to bring light to the people. Though, I must say I didn't understand half the references, I understood the message behind the poem. Long live He, indeed. "
    Posted by Lux on "A Song For Thor" by HeadpatSlut
  • ".."be not a fool in good company or alone" thanks for the reminder! Very empowering piece man, thanks! cheers!"
    Posted by deadmanshand on "Free Will" by HeadpatSlut
  • "beautifully put! we shouldn't dwell on regrets...moving past them is the key to forgiving ourselves and healing, cause most of the time the ones we hurt have found the strength to do just that and to forgive. life is way too short for all the ways we find to complicate it. "
    Posted by natalie on "The Coast" by HeadpatSlut
  • "i wish i could rate this higher, i'm blown away at the emotions reading this sparked in me. the last line just echoes, it's so powerful!"
    Posted by Unknown on "Let Me Bleed" by HeadpatSlut
  • "I like it, The ending has a hopeful touch that I don't care for all too much, but that's just because I'm a bastard pessimist. Great piece! "
    Posted by Unknown on "Nu Era Rising" by HeadpatSlut
  • "Yes! This fully captures what I so often feel when I delve into philosophy. I recall the teachings of Lao Tau most often for the insight to let go and embrace simplicity."
    Posted by FearlessDragon on "On Philosophy" by HeadpatSlut
  • "I imagined listening to this as if it were an actual song, and picked up on a slight Venom influence, perhaps? Either way, very good. "
    Posted by Despair on "Chaotic Return" by HeadpatSlut
  • "well it reads fairly easily. I don't know if I can put this to music though. still, lyric writing is so technical; and a challenge. It appears well done, although you missed the "L" on lungs in the beginning"
    Posted by Ravenblade on "Debris" by HeadpatSlut
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