Comments by All Members
- "To be young and immortal, if only for a moment. I remember the young girls in my classes drawing hearts and writing "Mike and Janet 4 Ever!" They really meant it (I wasn't so sure about Mike). Those were wonderful times for so many short sighted reasons. Your poem to me back there for a few minutes. For a few minutes I was a sweetheart again and my heart raced like a schoolboy with a crush."
Posted by Taunting The Reaper on "Another Found Letter Unsent" by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "the title spoke volumes...we really do pray reverently when things go wrong taking for granted the things that are right and free.
very well penned. thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Automatic Prayer" by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "This has some magically (Never thought I would used that word but hey... it's true) spectacular imagery here. I am very impressed. I love the first stanza and I agree with being able to breathe underwater, it does give one a sense of invisibility and for me I guess freedom, and not having that fear of drowning in something so vast such as the sea. Cheers for the read. "
Posted by Symbol on "Uninspired Underwater" by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "You burn me and bury me. How did I never see you before? "The doubting disease they called it."- I love this line. It reflects entirely on what I grew up with. Shatter."
Posted by Unknown on "To The Infected," by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "I love this. Rage is best like this, filled with intelligence and the ability to spit in the enemy face with heavy words he cannot turn from. Shallow despair they wallow in. Well done! You're quickly on the way to becoming a favorite. "
Posted by Unknown on "We're not the same cookie fucker!" by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "New Favorite. Instant attraction. Woman on woman, am I correct? This write was beautifully delicate with harsh strokes of sarcasm endowed with wit. Erotica perfected. "
Posted by Unknown on "Flower Maiden" by Kaleidoscope_Heart
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