Flower Maiden
By Kaleidoscope_Heart
The Ivy, fanged, mistress grazed her emerald fingers in desire
As I offered her an aged delicate flower
Kept alive
By naive lies
Once livened by
Chaste eyes
That I may abide by
…Lest I let her devour
Such a sacred flower
She stares at my offering,
A smile adorns her face
Amused,
“Did they scare you with promise of disease, and bearing?”
I nodded: admitting my fear
Her sardonic laughter danced in my ears
As her sapphire eyes caste a fire
In my spine.
Her lips kissed the dry pedals
Instantly swelling them pink
Making them moist with hunger
Tight
With a pulsating, passionate pain
She silenced my breathe with her finger
As she tasted the damp daisy
I offered so eagerly
Then left me
Panting
So endeared
Was I, by her mouth
As she lingered on mine
Her promise without words
(That no man could find)
Comments on "Flower Maiden"
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A former member wrote:
New Favorite. Instant attraction. Woman on woman, am I correct? This write was beautifully delicate with harsh strokes of sarcasm endowed with wit. Erotica perfected.
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On Tuesday, November 27, 2007, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
yum yum...sounds good. always a great write...and image...;)
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On Tuesday, November 20, 2007, thelostmessenger
(110) wrote:
whoa... how beautiful. this is really vivid, i love it. welcome! *messenger
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A former member wrote:
swelling pink damp daisies..oh my! such a lush scene you paint with your words.
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On Tuesday, November 20, 2007, Niemand
(355) wrote:
Sounds like quite the woman ;) Beautiful write. *Welcome to DP.-Airi