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"if you allow yourself to be trained... God help you..."
Posted by worm on "Trained" by etarnally damnd

"When I look back... I wish I could take it back. Stop running and be the person you believed in. The person you loved so unconditionally. You are the ghost that haunts my heart. I see all the pain I put you through when you deserved so much more. I deserve this pain. This regret. You bared it for so long for me. What right did I have to comment on your work...like they were just poems that meant nothing. If I could make it up to you now I would. But the memory of how you felt for me just like this account.... Is long since forgotten. _Sara_"
Posted by Unknown on "the knowlage only pain and time may bring" by etarnally damnd

"Oh, ol' friend despair. This gave me the chills."
Posted by Nimue44 on "FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" by etarnally damnd

"If I didn't know any better, I would say you were hiding in my closet... this perfectly describes the way I feel right now... about everything.... awesome write!"
Posted by Unknown on "fucking tired." by etarnally damnd

"I wosh I'd the knowlage needed to b heald and furget the memorys that this speeks of. nice potd, congrats!"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "the knowlage only pain and time may bring" by etarnally damnd

"Hey, I got a similar feeling to what I think you conveyed through this. And it is crushing"
Posted by Unknown on "I came so close..." by etarnally damnd

"I wish I could talk to you. You dumb boy, who lost all contact with me! I fucking hate it dude. How much do I have to beg for a message? Even if it shows how weak I am, I will! I dont need you michael. I dont need a shoulder to cry on, or a rebound. I need you to be my friend again. I miss you damnit. I do dream about you on a regular basis, its driving me insane. Talk to me please. I work at Circle K on Truman. Mostly weekend mornings. Come see me. "
Posted by LovelyAssassinx on "the knowlage only pain and time may bring" by etarnally damnd

"this site been about gaining acceptance from you? yeah....go get hit by a truck."
Posted by LovelyAssassinx on "pissed off rant from a pissed off youth from a pissedoff country" by etarnally damnd

"I know Im delayed...I havent been on here for awhile. Very nice piece. Im always here for you Mikie. And to those of you who keep fucking bitching about spell check....damnit get the fuck over it and just dont say anything at all...because since when has "
Posted by LovelyAssassinx on "pissed off rant from a pissed off youth from a pissedoff country" by etarnally damnd

"really don't care to change even that is to change what it really was when it was writen"
Posted by etarnally damnd on "pissed off rant from a pissed off youth from a pissedoff country" by etarnally damnd

"take it however the fuck u want. i didn't write this for ur damn enjoyment i wrote it to get it out and express some shit and this was the place i thought to write it read it or don't i don't give a damn. as for the spell check yeah its pretty bad but i r"
Posted by etarnally damnd on "pissed off rant from a pissed off youth from a pissedoff country" by etarnally damnd

"Agree with glasshouse but read the whole thing and enjoyed it hats off to you ~Crow"
Posted by Dark Wing on "pissed off rant from a pissed off youth from a pissedoff country" by etarnally damnd

"Nice concept. Painful. -hugs- "
Posted by LovelyAssassinx on "lady luck" by etarnally damnd

"you have too know when too fold. or dont give a shit and wait till u hit the jackpot like me lol. i always lose in everything."
Posted by Cetra on "lady luck" by etarnally damnd

"Hands over puppy, collector series of red dwarf and favorite type of pizza fresh from oven."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "fucking tired." by etarnally damnd

"Sounds like you are getting wise to the games, in that regard I think you a step ahead. Better to be with you, than with one that is not right for you. Don't let others talk you out of who or what you want...or yourself for that matter."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "fucking tired." by etarnally damnd

"mike i love you for who you are. dont worry about what people say because no one matters but you. other people will just let you down in life you are the only one you can count on. "
Posted by LovelyAssassinx on "fucking tired." by etarnally damnd

"and i prefer the latter"
Posted by Mari on "FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" by etarnally damnd

"fuck man that was awesome"
Posted by Mari on "FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" by etarnally damnd

"eventually there will be a low so be ready. very cool write "
Posted by Unknown on "random stoners ryhme." by etarnally damnd

"u aint share no high with me lol, thats uncool"
Posted by Unknown on "random stoners ryhme." by etarnally damnd

"I actually like this. It captures the flaws of human nature wonderfully and also its easy to relate to. nicely done. ♥"
Posted by LovelyAssassinx on "life's a bitch. and death is a bastard." by etarnally damnd

"Just find whatever feels good, whatever you think you can work with and enjoy as you get better at it (probably writing, if you're here), go with it. If you look at what you have, its easier to ignore what you don't."
Posted by Unknown on "life's a bitch. and death is a bastard." by etarnally damnd

"I seriously feel like this so often... and it never helps to go and read something somebody else wrote, or watch somebody else be given something you're sure you'll never get... and then hope is the killer."
Posted by Unknown on "life's a bitch. and death is a bastard." by etarnally damnd

"actually i like this...you do seem a bit hard on yourself, why is it whenever anyone is hard on themselves the world seems to be alot easier on them? neways, great write and expecting more"
Posted by Unknown on "life's a bitch. and death is a bastard." by etarnally damnd

"whatever you got, it's betterthan mine.. i just wish it would've rhymed a little more.. anyways, if you ever want to, you can dp mail me and we can talk some time.. your writes look like we would have a lot in common"
Posted by mywristshurt on "life's a bitch. and death is a bastard." by etarnally damnd

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