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""I need that fix", and then some more of other fixes :) Nice piece."
Posted by Void Vortex on "What I need" by darkdesires

"oops - in my review - shot was meant to be should (LOL)"
Posted by Leineco on "securing insecurity" by darkdesires

"a powerful and compelling write! How cruel the slow blooming of insecurity - leaving you devastated. You built it remorselessly and I could feel the creep as it took control. Not in any way to take away the power of the poem - just meaning to be helpful: a couple typos - re: "daily reminders of where your really are" (your shot be you) and plaque should be plague :-) "
Posted by Leineco on "securing insecurity" by darkdesires

"I know what its like to desperately cling to a hope that the love is real, that it could endure the storm and not wither away.. still can't let go"
Posted by The Crimson Queen on "What I need" by darkdesires

"I can feel myself connecting to more of these lines than I care to admit, wanting to be everything to someone who is your everything. "
Posted by The Crimson Queen on "Puzzle pieced together (Mature content)" by darkdesires

"Amazing! Great write. The slow, meticulous build up... followed by a heart wrenching ending. Well done. Captivating read. 10/10"
Posted by SickSanityJenn on "A night of giving up and waking up" by darkdesires

"*Evil grins* even though i'm not into guys, I thoroughly enjoyed the story. I like the irony & gore of it. I have fun with sharp objects as well ;) Veddy nice indeed!"
Posted by Deathkitten on "Bleeding out love (Mature Content)" by darkdesires

"I believe Aurora is right...you have a muse."
Posted by PassionateDarkDesire on "Things you do..." by darkdesires

"I'm aching for you right now dd. I just want to wrap you in a hug and wish I had to powers to...to make it better. *hugs*"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "How I remember it (Mature content)" by darkdesires

"That was so beautifully written! It was amazing. It flowed so smoothly and easy to read. Write on;)"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "happy and broken" by darkdesires

"ooooh the ultimate drug...nicely executed. love the way you write."
Posted by natalie on "What I need" by darkdesires

"well done! love can have a smothering effect as well as a liberating one...depending on the stage of the relationship and which way the winds blow us. thank you for sharing this ."
Posted by natalie on "Choke on Love" by darkdesires

"Wow, it's really beautiful. It reminded me of a time when I thought love was something so pure and sacred, instead of what many people use the word for today. it then stirred up a memory from when I was younger and got pricked by a rose my Dad gave me. I got angry at it."
Posted by Unknown on "Choke on Love" by darkdesires

"heh ya love is a bitch, but its more about how I'm kinda sick of just everyone spewing shit about love and they have no idea what its like to sacrafise and struggle for something even when you have no support. just blindinly talking about it with no meaning other than just fucking is getting sickening because thats all anyone can seem to do anymore."
Posted by darkdesires on "Choke on Love" by darkdesires

"Damn love! But I understand...loves a bitch"
Posted by PassionateDarkDesire on "Choke on Love" by darkdesires

"Btw...I'm sorry."
Posted by PassionateDarkDesire on "happy and broken" by darkdesires

"So pyramids were built from the bottom the top...you need to break this pyramid all together and bring your self out from that tomb..the walls..that are locking you.. your insecurity..the walls that are your security.Nice write..Very revealing..makes me feel almost insecure..In that I find it effective..to move me..and still me ...stunned"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "securing insecurity" by darkdesires

"sweet, beautiful, heartfelt... just a few of the words that come to mind when reading this."
Posted by The Crimson Queen on "Things you do..." by darkdesires

"Heartfelt and intensely loving. I know your heart was in it deeply. Much enjoyed my friend! =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Things you do..." by darkdesires

"This was beautiful and sweet. :)"
Posted by Loketha Angel on "Things you do..." by darkdesires

"Simple, sweet, well written. You have a muse inspiring you. "
Posted by Aurora_Light on "Things you do..." by darkdesires

"i can relate all too closely. very nice write (and thank you for you comments =] }"
Posted by UnrequitedDream on "happy and broken" by darkdesires

"This one is my favorite so far that I have read. Easy to feel your pain with the way you have let this out, and shared yourself. Beautiful. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "What I need" by darkdesires

"This Was an Amawzingly Fucked up Story...Props"
Posted by Deaths Apostle on "Comfort (Mature Content)" by darkdesires

"...wow...i read this too close to the situation....."
Posted by PassionateDarkDesire on "happy and broken" by darkdesires

"I can't say that I liked it that much...The ending was fine..."
Posted by Unknown on "Reflections of a night at the pool (Mature content)" by darkdesires

"This was very sadistic, but beautifully written."
Posted by Unknown on "Comfort (Mature Content)" by darkdesires

"nice work"
Posted by technicolour-girl on "Puzzle pieced together (Mature content)" by darkdesires

"sometimes we all need be be fixed, but that is what friends are for. Good Work! ~crow"
Posted by Dark Wing on "happy and broken" by darkdesires

"I don't know if I really understood... neat prose, though."
Posted by Lolita on "Lies at bed time" by darkdesires

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