What I need
By darkdesires
Your eyes glimer like beautiful jewels
And silky smooth hair to match
But that smile...
No that smile has to go
A face worthy of a great sculpting
An intoxicating personality
But when I come off my high
It leaves me in pieces
Crimson red lips
Sweeter than pure honey
And that tongue
A venomous stinger
Tell me you love me
Hold me tight forever
I need it...
I need the lie
Give me hope
A tomorrow to look onto
Sweet candy on my lips
But its only temporary
So love me
Hold me
Please... just a little longer
I need the lie... more than ever
I need that fix...
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© 2006 darkdesires
Published on Tuesday, July 25, 2006.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, June 29, 2017, Void Vortex
(298) wrote:
"I need that fix", and then some more of other fixes :) Nice piece.
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On Friday, January 29, 2016, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
I know what its like to desperately cling to a hope that the love is real, that it could endure the storm and not wither away.. still can't let go
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A former member wrote:
This one is my favorite so far that I have read. Easy to feel your pain with the way you have let this out, and shared yourself. Beautiful. =)
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On Wednesday, November 8, 2006, Hello Dead Kitty
(29) wrote:
A quite beautiful and moving write...excellent job, my friend!
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On Tuesday, July 25, 2006, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
Beautiful, baby... Much like you. :) ~*~tart~*~
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On Tuesday, July 25, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
Wow this almost brought me to tears dark; I couldn't let go of it but I wanted to it just hurt. I understand this completely and it was just sad and lovely ~nightly