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securing insecurity
By darkdesires
a feeling you run from
making your mind race with you
an endless sea of possibilities
it starts with depression
a mind and soul crushing feeling washing over
paralyzing the body and leaving it numb
next comes the inferiority
daily reminders of where your really are
placing you at the bottom, where you belong
desperate tears
desperate crys
desperate attempts
its all a part of your mind
the insecurities that grip you
plaque your mind
so cry
choke
sulk alone
the security is simple
knowing it'll come back
just hope it doesn't consume you
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© 2006 darkdesires
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On Tuesday, May 24, 2016, Leineco
(59)
wrote:
oops - in my review - shot was meant to be should (LOL)
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On Tuesday, May 24, 2016, Leineco
(59) wrote:
a powerful and compelling write! How cruel the slow blooming of insecurity - leaving you devastated. You built it remorselessly and I could feel the creep as it took control. Not in any way to take away the power of the poem - just meaning to be helpful: a couple typos - re: "daily reminders of where your really are" (your shot be you) and plaque should be plague :-)
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On Thursday, August 12, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(346) wrote:
So pyramids were built from the bottom the top...you need to break this pyramid all together and bring your self out from that tomb..the walls..that are locking you.. your insecurity..the walls that are your security.Nice write..Very revealing..makes me feel almost insecure..In that I find it effective..to move me..and still me ...stunned
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On Thursday, August 3, 2006, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
This just blew me away, my own words just don't seem to reach my mind as I am still drowning within the depth of your words.. This was tragically beautiful enough to steal away my breath.
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On Thursday, August 3, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
finding the bottom of the bottomless pit is more than most could ever fathom......an ineffective sense of self.....a paralyzingly piece.
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A former member wrote:
.."the security is simple/knowing it'll come back.." Intriguing stream of thoughts, set my mind to reeling. Solid write. Extremely well done, dear. Thank you.
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On Wednesday, August 2, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
This was just overwelmhing it just sunk me to the body of a river and left me drowning it holds a darkening hope that only shines so brightly ~Gothic
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