Comments by All Members
- "Fuckin perfect write. Vivid and dissolving somehow like smoke. It reminds of what a voice feels like spoken into winter darkness, fading but clear. Bravo"
Posted by Adagios on "I Am/I Miss You" by Carmina Gitana
- "this is fantastic, completely original. don't know if it's an analogy (the wolf) or to be taken literally. But the rhyming and flow are spot on. I felt sorry for our wolf when he was caught and clipped -who are the bad ones wolf or human?? 'you're only lawless till you're caught' .. yes. "
Posted by out there on "Afternoon of the Wolf" by Carmina Gitana
- "Excellent to see something new from you! I enjoyed the imagery and pacing of this piece very much. I love the notion of moving beyond cloudless, sunny days into the waiting flood. You have been missed! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Amateur Meteorology" by Carmina Gitana
- "Beautiful hushed tone that reinforces a calm journey deep within the mind-scape. I fell in love with the idea of "Where the pulsing of the earth
was clear and strong beneath my feet,..." exquisite detail you laid out here. .applauds. -Write on love"
Posted by soul_versing on "Rhythms of the Sun" by Carmina Gitana
- "I'm so irregular here these days, but in the small moments I pass through, I never regret stopping in at your page.
Fucking magnificent write. The viewpoint here original and excellently conveyed; powerful and incisive. You rock&rule, as always. The world needs more of you, and I should come by your space more damn often."
Posted by purr_verse on "Afternoon of the Wolf" by Carmina Gitana
- "such a tragic ending, this is too real. i felt like i was there-i could smell the smoke in the air. very nice."
Posted by Twilight on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana
- "Wow, you definitely had something to let loose here. It is very good, and delightfully disturbing too. Apparently, you had some demons to conquer-I think this piece of writing did the trick!"
Posted by Unknown on "The Shredded Paper Poem" by Carmina Gitana
- "how i weep in the wake of this and my own wait.......... my heart has such love and admiration for you, dear lady. you are stellar always."
Posted by Unknown on "The Siren's Lament" by Carmina Gitana
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