Comments by All Members
- "the ending verse is spectacular. I found this to be quite intriguing since I've never successfully negotiated with my heart. It does whatever the hell it wants.. I have no say so. Though I like it that way. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "the negotiation of my heartbeats" by KittyStryker
- "Lovely word use, etc...but the subject matter fills me with sadness somehow. Much of the "reality" we live in can actually be of our own creation. Anyway, lovely flow and your personality shines through, as always. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "the negotiation of my heartbeats" by KittyStryker
- "mmm . . gorgeous, kitty . . i love the line "lemonade in a thunderstorm" . . the way you phrase things . . it brings your world to me . . i miss you"
Posted by cre on "melt" by KittyStryker
- "*sigh* My relationship ended today...the kind where I wasnt allowed to fall in love with him.Only prob was I was in love with him.I think he knew it...and I tripped over our agreement.This hurts because its all too real for me."
Posted by Mademoiselle_Minx on "the negotiation of my heartbeats" by KittyStryker
- "wow, a raw & painful feeling, put across with such neat and impressive poetry prowess as always. i like the kinda raw sincere feelings conjured through ya works, & this piece is no less different. awesome. -MeL-"
Posted by aXe FactoR on "the negotiation of my heartbeats" by KittyStryker
- "I am amazed by all the beautiful images you could create since you started posting on DP... Countless poems, always wonderful. ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "melt" by KittyStryker
- "This is very sweet and orginal. "you are fresh blueberries hidden sunsoaked on the forest paths" Fav. line.~T~"
Posted by Mistress Shadow on "melt" by KittyStryker
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