Comments by All Members
- "Back for another taste. This is one of my all time favorites on this site, for cathartic and masochistic reasons. Still such a gem this write. "
Posted by Adagios on "Please Come Home " by Smiles
- "It's hard to recover once you gain consciousness of a well crafted lie. I can relate..."
Posted by LIFEINVADER on "Why? " by Smiles
- "I'm trying not to relate this to my situation because it takes away from the work and dedication put to thought here. Simply said; I wish for things like this every day. "
Posted by Lux on "For You " by Smiles
- "Thank you. I hope the imagery was conveyed clearly. "
Posted by Smiles on "For You " by Smiles
- "i loved this, the line "Like a mosaic of misery" really stood out to me, Excellent write : )"
Posted by happilydepressed on "For You " by Smiles
- "Feeling this. Romance is hard and rarely works out in reality like it does in fiction. "Maybe I'm just not built to have a second half"... That resonates with me. As does your excellent closing line. Thank you for posting this."
Posted by Queazenart on "Empty" by Smiles
- "It's important to know yourself, when you're part of two. I have sometimes allowed the failings of others to become my own mistakes. You have to know where your responsibility ends and their's begin. In the blender, we are all at fault. Tangos take 2.... Love fucking sucks."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Empty" by Smiles
- "Often touched upon subject but this was particularly well done. Aren't we all the same in this, every starving artist lives here. "
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Empty" by Smiles
- "mmm yea I get it. I've only got a wee bit left myself, if any. Cheers!"
Posted by Patches on "Empty" by Smiles
- "Honestly, it's probably a bit of both. Thank you for reading Lily. "
Posted by Smiles on "Empty" by Smiles
- "Thank you for the comment, Rose. Hopefully someday things will be different."
Posted by Smiles on "Empty" by Smiles
- "Maybe you weren't the one that was wrong..maybe you just kept on picking the wrong ones. Nicely penned, flowed perfectly while read. "
Posted by River Lily on "Empty" by Smiles
- "A feeling that is known all too well. I particularly felt that last line harder than I would have liked to have lol. Thank you for the read
~RTBH~ "
Posted by RoseTheBrokenHearted on "Empty" by Smiles
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