Comments by All Members
- "wow. this is fucking intense. the last stanza was great. this poem reads in a very live fast, die young sort of way. i love this. ....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "Old Saltwater street" by Dr Benway
- "the dedication and terrible sense of loss in this overcomes me. your words hit so powerfully, i was completely lost in this even after i finished reading it. ....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "Gold" by Dr Benway
- "this reads different than your other pieces...though just as captivating, just in a different way. intensely heartshattering and beautifully composed...it speaks in volumes like no other..i had vivid images running through my mind reading this."
Posted by AniDayz on "Gold" by Dr Benway
- "*not feeling. If there's anyone that understands me better, or that I understand better, show them to me. I think that we were spawned from the same cell, man."
Posted by Six-Out on "Gold" by Dr Benway
- "Me and you. We see things the same, just set the letters in different orders to say what we mean. Man...this, this is like any of your other works. I feel it a little too much, and I'm left wishing that I didn't. That I could pretend I'm only reading and "
Posted by Six-Out on "Gold" by Dr Benway
- "Strong words to break my already fragile heart. But simply to see your name in the poetry list brings a smile to my face.
We've missed you sweetie!!! xoxo"
Posted by The Crimson Queen on "Gold" by Dr Benway
- "i am beyond astounded. this is really good, couldnt stray my eyes away from this. i will be reading much more of your stuff in the futer. *J*"
Posted by Jerrica on "Gold" by Dr Benway
- "You always tug and pluck at my heart chords. You're the emotional voice I wish I had. I'm so glad you're safe and pray that you are well."
Posted by Elegant Kiss on "Gold" by Dr Benway
- "I read this at least 6 times before I decided to comment.. Weighing heavy on my chest, your regret. gods, I've missed you something awful. The last two lines are beyond beautiful. I miss you. Thank you."
Posted by Elegant Kiss on "Gold" by Dr Benway
- "Aha! You posted.. Eee. That makes my whole month. I pictured you reading this, not a loud, but in your head. It was heartfelt and tragic.."
Posted by Elegant Kiss on "Gold" by Dr Benway
- "One could only wish to have half the talent you just shared in such an exquisite poem. "
Posted by Err0r on "Gold" by Dr Benway
- "ya, everything I do is rough. I am not one of those people that thinks it's wrong to edit a poem, but if I were to edit all the grammer/spelling etc. Errors, I would over heat my computer with the spell checker. :)"
Posted by Dr Benway on "Gold" by Dr Benway
- "I really enjoyed this, it is a little rough, but I love it. The content and the religious like idea...brilliant I say! "
Posted by Crysa on "Gold" by Dr Benway
- "dammit i miss u. glad i got to read this---this mindbending in the darkened corners of every.fucking.thing i could possibly imagine from this piece of art. thankyou"
Posted by AniDayz on "Old Saltwater street" by Dr Benway
- "Usually I'm content with reading something and taking just what I take from it.. But half a handful of people make that not enough... you're one of them. I've missed you."
Posted by Elegant Kiss on "Old Saltwater street" by Dr Benway
- "You have such a unique voice. I'm always left wondering exactly what happened. I read too far into.. and I try to figure out exactly what inspired it, what this meant.. what that meant..."
Posted by Elegant Kiss on "Old Saltwater street" by Dr Benway
- "the last 2 lines were perfect/amazing. this is the story of my life, i swear! :) anyway, it was stated more eloquantly than i ever could though. great write!"
Posted by Unknown on "Caffeinated Fragility" by Dr Benway
- "In your wallet was a picture of us,
and enough to buy two points, "...damn....just....damn... im moved..and i dont truly move often...simplistic..yet brilliant..damn"
Posted by A Velvet Tongue on "It's your birhday today" by Dr Benway
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