Caffeinated Fragility

By Dr Benway

Sunrise,
convictions withheld for another day.
A prisoner of my very own red eyed utopia.
I wonder, what keeps a man, this man, coming back,
to these wee moments of the morning?

Hour upon hour, coffee upon coffee
This familiar late-night game, again I have played,
all within the confines of a fragile me.

Oh, behold the waking hour my dear,
and how it prays a hopeful prayer for our tomorrow,
"It is truth I shall find in sleep,
For it is lies I must face when I awake."

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Copyright 2005 Dr Benway
Published on Monday, March 28, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: the last 2 lines were perfect/amazing. this is the story of my life, i swear! :) anyway, it was stated more eloquantly than i ever could though. great write!

  • A former member wrote: I'm in awe at how well you put these words together to form such an impeccable cognitive thought. I would NEVER have been able to say this, and neither would anyone else. ....-samone

  • The Crimson Queen On Tuesday, March 29, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    your definately right, I can relate to this..."It is truth I shall find in sleep, For it is lies I must face when I awake." I still love that line the most..for its most definately true..

  • AniDayz On Tuesday, March 29, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    damn...i hear your voice loud + clear...

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Monday, March 28, 2005, Spiritus_Frumenti (340)By person wrote:

    very wise words here..-l-

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