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The ten hour itch.
By Dr Benway
Desolation rings through the silence,
picking, scratching, burning,
a sickness with no illness,
confessions without sin.
Ten hours, only ten hours...
An ecstasy so glorious,
a greed, with no pity,
innocence lost, and regained
if only for a time,
will it be this time?
Ten hours, only ten hours...
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Copyright 2005 Rustedfaith
Published on Wednesday, January 26, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "The ten hour itch."
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A former member wrote:
i like it
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A former member wrote:
This left me lingering on each word. Every line is enthralling... and I couldn't keeping my mind from pondering deeper and deeper about this. Very interesting. ....-samone
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A former member wrote:
*couldn't keep my mind from...
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On Thursday, March 31, 2005, A Velvet Tongue
(436)
wrote:
alot can happen in 10 hours...a problem can be born or solved..a life made or taken...a promise kept or broken..love this piece!
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On Saturday, March 26, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
very compounded...unveiling yet not entirely...the words within this can be attatched to a lot of things in my head, past experience etc. and i do relate...'a sickness with no illness'...*perfecto*
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On Sunday, February 13, 2005, sIo
(926) wrote:
i do not know this...that's all i can say
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On Thursday, February 10, 2005, Zara Synn
(57) wrote:
I know what you speak of...in a different chemical form...I think this is my favorite by you so far. I love poems that are written straight from the soul to the paper...
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On Saturday, January 29, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(242) wrote:
i know addiction good confession -kitty
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On Saturday, January 29, 2005, Anth
(1133) wrote:
this is so well worded, it made me curious. it doesnt really reveal too much but it means that you can translate it into your own thoughts
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On Thursday, January 27, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
short and sweet...fabulous write! ~AoD
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On Thursday, January 27, 2005, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
I feel like I know this, yet it escapes me. I don't know if that's a good thing or not...
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A former member wrote:
"Desolation" lol i love that word For some reason i never use though ok anyways this is short but very neat i enjoyed it very much so.
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