Comments by All Members
- "I'll never forget you leaf for that 'desperate little girl' is imprinted for me. How I wish I could know the adult in you now. ~T"
Posted by Mistress Shadow on "JUST BE" by GothicBlack
- "How I wish to just BE. If only it were that simple, yet I strive everyday towards that end. Wonderful write!"
Posted by soul dancer on "JUST BE" by GothicBlack
- "wow, this was very truthful and revealing. I love how you exposed your thoughts rigt down to the marrow of your point.. beautiful "
Posted by Disassembly Boy on "JUST BE" by GothicBlack
- "I realized how very little sense my comment made after I posted it: I meant, if only we could JUST BE, instead of being everything else to everyone else..if that made any more sense.."
Posted by Unknown on "JUST BE" by GothicBlack
- "i never left a comment on this?!?!?! i coudl SWORN i did!!! I know i bookmarked it the moment I read it *licks you* I was once beautiful too"
Posted by Unknown on "I Was Once Beautiful" by GothicBlack
- "To the point of breaking...and back. Yeah, I agree...this is beautiful. Reminds me of a song also. Would be pretty as a song. You made me ache for some kind of break..."
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "The Rains" by GothicBlack
- "This was beautiful. It reminded me of a sad song by The Alan Parsons Project called "Oh Life, There Must Be More"."
Posted by soul dancer on "The Rains" by GothicBlack
- "This is so powerful, I really enjoyed the images and raw emotions evoked in it. I'm glad you are still writing, if only a little bit :D.
Asheai"
Posted by Kali Ma on "The Rains" by GothicBlack
- "Amazing indeed! Pain, pain and more pain. I get a sense that this poem does not even come close to describing that pain too. Beautiful work though...your poetry is constantly evolving and growing. :::hugs:::"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Goodnight Prayer" by GothicBlack
- "fight against it! I know the passion and ambition within you could conquer anything (look where you are now, nothing stopped you from getting down there!). Miss you muchly, ~T"
Posted by Mistress Shadow on "I've Deceived Myself" by GothicBlack
- "its more suddle than any of your other poems, but i think you wanted it that way because your brain slowly fries throughtout the day and it slows down.. not saying i didnt like it or that i dont understand, it just isnt you"
Posted by mywristshurt on "I've Deceived Myself" by GothicBlack
- "that's so beautiful.. i wish i were able to say that to somebody.. the love you have for him, i can tell, can't be put into words.. you write so beautifully"
Posted by mywristshurt on "To Break the Silence" by GothicBlack
- ""I was once beautiful
That many years ago
Now I wonder, what has happened?
What truly has changed me so" Nothing. You are still absolutely beautiful hun! And this work is just wonderful, too. Keep the ink flowing!"
Posted by Bluegirl on "I Was Once Beautiful" by GothicBlack
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