Comments by All Members
- "Wow.. Just wish I could stop with that 'cutting thing'.. But it goes about those words: they are fantastic :). I've got an poem about it too: called 'wounds'. Interested?"
Posted by Unknown on "Beautiful Cutting" by GothicBlack
- "that was beatuful...i can't even recallall the times people have told me i would be so pretty if i could just stop wearing black and if the scars and burn marks disappeared...*sigh*"
Posted by Unknown on "I Was Once Beautiful" by GothicBlack
- "A beautiful poem from I'm sure a beautiful person. I think you're going to get to the point where you won't want to hide anymore. xo"
Posted by Unknown on "I Was Once Beautiful" by GothicBlack
- "for some reason this reminds me of a song by jack off jill called fear of dying."I'm not afraid of speaking my mind, I'm just afraid of being bored." Except yours actually sounds better. Heh."
Posted by Unknown on "Fear Of . . ." by GothicBlack
- "wow i cant believe ive never read this lol .. it's awsome.. i know exactly how that feels, as i'm sure a million people do.. but you wrote it so nicely... thanks "
Posted by yslehc on "Beautiful Cutting" by GothicBlack
- "so much emotion and yet, completely empty. Hopelessness is difficult, that's what is resting heavily on my shoulders at this very moment, great poem *~seraph~*"
Posted by Seraphic on "Tormented Daily" by GothicBlack
- ""I long to release the heartache that*s whispered in my ears" This strummed a sad song on my heart-strings...beautifully stunning in it*s hopelessness
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Posted by Unknown on "Tormented Daily" by GothicBlack
- "Only empty arms...that last line just drove the poem in further. I felt the emptiness within this poem. Excellent write."
Posted by Unknown on "Tormented Daily" by GothicBlack
- "Great poem. I feel just like this. Except i haven't really stopped cutting. I try to but the need to cut becomes to much to bear. "
Posted by Unknown on "Beautiful Cutting" by GothicBlack
- "Ooo that last line was a suprise! And it gave the whole thing this twist that should have been seen coming from the beginning but wasn't! Ooo, great writting! When begins to rise, clarity bubbles and chaos begins. I see this. ~JMDW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "I’d Rather Not, I’d Rather Dream" by GothicBlack
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